一、写作范例 初中三年生活转瞬即逝，如今即将毕业离开母校，此时此刻，你是否还记得升入初中第一天的 情景呢？请以“My First Day in the Middle School ”为题，用英语写一篇短文，描述一下你入校当 天的所见所闻、经历感受，再次体验曾经的美好时光，满怀信心地去迎接新的未来！词数：80~ 100 词。 要求：（1）语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范。 （2）文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。 （3）短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 My First Day in the Middle School When I first walked into the middle school, _____ _____ _____ Now I will leave my school. I’m going to work hard in the future to make my school proud of me. Step 1 认真审题，明确要求 主题 校园生活 人称 第一人称为主 时态 一般过去时为主 文体 记叙文 要点 第一步，承接短文开头，描述你入校当天的感受； 第二步，结合自身经历，描述你入校时的所见所闻和经历感受，可列举具体的事例； 第三步，抒发毕业感悟并书写结语。 Step 2 列要点，编提纲 立框架 列要点 添细节 开门见山，描述入 校当天的感受。 结合自身经历，描述 你入校时的所见所 闻和经历感受，可列 举具体的事例。 进行总结概括，重 申主题和观点。 Step 3 巧用词句，衔接成文 My First Day in the Middle School When I first walked into the middle school, I was excited as well as worried. I was excited because I was a student of junior middle school now. I was worried because I didn’t quite know about the teachers and students in this school. I was afraid I couldn’t fit in well. However, when I sat down at my desk and began to know about my teachers and classmates, I found everyone was really nice to me. Teachers were very kind and ready to help us. My classmates were active and easy to get along with. After class, I played soccer with my newly-made friends on the playground. Looking at the beautiful campus, I gradually forgot my nervousness. I felt at home. At the end of that first school day, I felt no more fear and I believed I would have lots of fun at this new school. Now I will leave my school. I’m going to work hard in the future to make my school proud of me. 二、实战演练 假定你是李平，请阅读以下邮件并回复。词数 70 左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Hi Li Ping! How are you It’s my first day at a new school today. It’s a great school. Do you like your school How do you feel about your school and classmates Can you write to me soon I’m looking forward to your reply. All the best. John Dear John, _____ _____ Li Ping 1、话题分析 本单元的写作主题是“介绍自己的信息去交朋友 ”。 2、好词佳句 词汇短 语积累 1.Personal Information (个人信息) Full name (全名)First name (名)Last name (姓)Age (年龄)Nationality (国籍)Hometown (家乡) Hobby (爱好) Favorite food (最喜欢的食物) Favorite sport (最喜欢的运动) 2.Introduction Expressions (介绍用语) Nice to meet you. (很高兴认识你。) I'm pleased to introduce myself. (我很高兴介绍我自己。) Allow me to introduce myself. (请允许我自我介绍。) 3.Social Skills (社交技能) Make friends (交朋友) Cross-cultural communication (跨文化交际) 4.Detailed Description (详细描述) be interested in (对...感兴趣) enjoy doing sth. (喜欢做某事) Cultural awareness (文化意识) ... ...
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