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课件网) 读后续写微技能 Description of Emotions Example: However, when I stood on the stage, with so many eyes fixed on me, … I felt nervous. Vivid & detailed Description of emotions You can describe a character’s emotions from three aspects. Mental responses 心理活动 Physical signals 外在表现 Internal sensations 内心感觉 What a character is feeling inside. What other people can see. What a character is thinking. Example: I was nervous However, when I stood on the stage, with so many eyes fixed on me, … My heart was beating quickly (internal sensations) with my legs trembling/ my palms sweating (physical signal) . I wondered if the audience would like me (mental responses). Physical signals 外在表现 关于兴奋/高兴的描写 形容词 名词 动词(短语) happy; pleased; delighted; joyful; excited; thrilled; wild with joy 抓住：seized; took hold of 打败：got the better of 席卷：swept over 涌出：surged through happiness; pleasure; delight; joy; excitement; thrill; Excitement My heart excitement me 充满：was filled with; overflowed with 关于兴奋/高兴的描写 内心感觉 外在表现 one’s heart was like a singing bird one’s heart was overflowing with joy one’s heart was thumping with excitement wear a bright/broad smile smile brightly; grin at sb; beam at sb; beam with pleasure laugh; burst into laughter; burst out laughing; one’s (eyes/face) light up with delight 喜形于色 one’s eyes shine with excitement be radiant with happiness 容光焕发 clap one’s hands jump/dance with joy; 露齿而笑；咧着嘴笑；龇着牙笑 笑容满面；眉开眼笑 关于兴奋/高兴的描写 写作训练：当主持人宣布她获奖时，她兴奋极了。 When the host announced that she won the prize, she felt very excited. When the host announced that she won the prize, she was seized with excitement/ a wide excitement took hold of her. When the host announced that she won the prize, her eyes light up with excitement. When the host announced that she won the prize, her heart was thumping with excitement. Description of emotion Internal sensations: What a character is feeling inside. Physical signals：What other people can see. Mental responses： What a character is thinking. Rhetorical device Simile/ metaphor 明喻/暗喻 Personification 拟人 Contrast 对比 Exaggeration 夸张 Active words Vivid action description Vivid adv./adj. description + Main Character Minor Character How to write Thank you!
