(
课件网) How to better our writing 写作复习课 ABCDE-writing method Step 1 Analyze(审题) Step 2 Brain storm Step 4 Decorate (美化) Step 3 Connect Step 5 Erase(排除错误) Analyze(审题) Brain storm Decorate (美化) Connect Erase How many parts should we write Part 1 Understanding Part 2 Examples Part 3 What you learn Introduction Body part Conclusion Analyze(审题) Brain storm Decorate (美化) Connect Erase What tense and person might we use >=100 words Write down your title No copy No real names Analyze(审题) Brain storm Decorate (美化) Connect Erase Eddie has trouble with _____. I have trouble with _____. doing CLC Analyze(审题) Brain storm Decorate (美化) Connect Erase How could trouble be our friend Trouble Experiencing trouble is a common part of life, but it can be our stepping stone(垫脚石). Trouble is a great chance for learning and growth rather than failures. Face it and solve it. In this way we can understand that our abilities can improve with practice and that mistakes are a key part of the learning process. Trouble teaches us valuable lessons, for example, asking for help. Making mistakes is a natural part of learning and we shouldn’t feel afraid to ask our parents, teachers and friends for help. Trouble provide a great chance for to learn from each other. Trouble can teach us how to solve problems. A big problem can be separated into several small and manageable problems. When we face a big problem, keep positive and break it down into smaller ones. Then we can solve it. In conclusion, trouble is our chance to embrace a better version of ourselves. Writing Tip: Remember useful expressions when reading. Eddie's Part 1 After reading Auggie’s story, I’m really touched. I realize that trouble is a friend. It means that trouble is a great chance for learning and growth. Analyze(审题) Brain storm Decorate (美化) Connect Erase Circle the linking words(连接词) I had trouble these days because my mother asked me to attend CLC(中式补习班). However, my friend could play outside while I was doing extra homework. I was so jealous(嫉妒的) of him that I could not focus. Analyze(审题) Brain storm Decorate (美化) Connect Erase How to use linking words So I decided to talk to my mom. _____ I gave her my straight-A school report, she was happy. I told her that I needn’t do extra homework. _____, I needed some time to relax. _____, my mom said that she loved me and she hoped that I could have a better future. I understood her worries about my future. _____, I promised that I could handle my school work. _____, my mom agreed to give me some free time. When Instead However Therefore Finally Writing Tip: Use linking words according to the context(情境) and punctuation. When Instead However Therefore Finally Analyze(审题) Brain storm Decorate (美化) Connect Erase How to better it After reading Auggie’s story, I’m really touched. I realize that trouble is a friend. It means that trouble is a great chan ... ...
