2017年高考英语错竞技场：短文改错4.易错点睛

（Ⅰ） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 ，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。 修改：在错的词下画一横线(____)，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意： 1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。 My soccer coach retir ed in last week.I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party.My mum makes the better biscuits in the world，so I decide to ask her for help.Mum taught me some basic step of baking.I insisted on doing most of the baking myself.I thought the biscuits were really well.My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up. At a party，my coach，w ith a biscuit in his mouth，asked surprisingly who made them and joked，“I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.” My favorite p icture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter! 【答案】 My soccer coach ret ired in last week. I wanted to do special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the biscuits in the world， so I to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really .My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor I was packing them up. At party， my coach， with a biscuit in his mouth， asked surprisingly who made them and joked， “I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.” My favorite pictu re at the party is of my coach and me the biscuits with happy laughter! 【解析】 1．去掉in　[last week上个星期，前面无需加冠词。] 2．anything→something　[something用在肯定句中，表示“一些事”，anything“任何事”。] 3．better→best　[我的妈妈做了世界上最好吃的饼干，此处不是比较含义，应是最高级(best)。] 4．decide→decided　[全文的时态都是一般过去时，故把decide改为decided。] 5．step→steps　[根据前面的some，step应该是复数形式。] 6．well→good　[作表语的是形容词good，well是副词，作状语。] 7．after→when/whil e　[我唯一所犯的错误就是当我包装饼干的时候，掉在地上一些。when/while当……的时候，after 在……之后。] 8．a→the　[此处表特指，at the party 在晚会上。] 9．just后加to　[动词不定式表示目的，我也许得再退休一次，能吃到更多的饼干。] 10．enjoy→enjoying　[and连接两个并列的(动)名词，enjoy是动词，所以改成enjoying。] （Ⅱ） Hi, Janice， It’s been a month sinc e I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing. As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here.We hang out together during lunch and after school.We’ve been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars.It’s been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many.And I started to see this as a time－wasting activity! In fact，I don’t like to go anymore, so I’m afraid I’ll lose their friendship.How do you think I should do If you are me，would you talk t ... ...