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课件网) 第6课时 话题写作指导 本单元的话题为“如何成为更好的自己”,属于“人与自我·自我成长”主题范畴。 要求我们能够用英文介绍自己所遇到的问题及挑战,接纳自我,突破自我等基本信息。 话题分析 01 写作指导 02 写作任务 成功是一段攀登险峰的旅程,当人们站在峰顶时,不仅收获掌声,更化作灯塔,照亮后来者的追梦之路。假设你是李华,学校即将开展以“The successful person in my heart”为题的征文活动。请你根据思维导图信息,介绍你心目中的成功的人及给你的启示。 要求:1.短文须包含导图中所有信息,并适当拓展; 2.不少于80词; 参考词汇:since自从;spirit精神;give up放弃;pay off得到回报; courage勇气 思路点拨 第一步:审题 体裁: 人称: 时态: 第二步:列提纲 记叙文 第三人称 一般过去时与一般现在时 第三步:句子积累 开头句: 1.This is all over the world.We can her.这是全世界著名的游泳运动 员。我们可以从她身上学到很多东西。 中间句: 1.She was born March 1st,1996, Hangzhou.她于1996年 3月1日出生在杭州。 a famous swimmer learn a lot from on in 2.She about 5 hours every day.But she never . 她每天训练大约5个小时,但她从没放弃过。 3.Her hard work off.她的付出已经得到了回报。 4.She her gold medals at the Olympics.她在奥运会上赢得 了自己的金牌。 结尾句: 1.Her story teaches us our dreams.她的故事教给我们绝不要放弃自己的梦想。 practiced swimming gave up paid won not to give up 2.We also learn about the meaning of and from her.我们从她身上还了解了努力和勇气的意义。 3.As the saying goes...俗话说…… hard work courage 名言警句: 2.He laughs best who laughs last.谁笑到最后,谁笑得最好。 1.Where there is a will,there is a way.有志者事竟成。 范文品鉴 【基础篇】 In my heart,the successful person is a famous swimmer.Her story has inspired me all along the way of my growth.人物基本情况介绍 Her story teaches us not to give up our dreams.We also learn about the meaning of hard work and courage from her.感受 【拔高篇】 In my heart,the successful person is a famous swimmer.Her story has inspired me all along the way of my growth.人物基本情况介绍 类文训练 03 确定写作标题 确定写作体裁 要求:1.短文须包含图中所有信息,并适当拓展; 2.不少于80词(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。 The role model in my heart The role model in my heart is a disabled singer who achieved her dream with great courage. One possible version: The role model in my heart The role model in my heart is a disabled singer who achieved her dream with great courage. Because of illness,she lost her eyesight when she was only three months old.However,with her love for music,strong will and hard work,she made great success in music.Although she lives in darkness,she faces life with a smile and brings light to the world. Through her story,I truly understand the saying,“Nothing in the world is difficult for one who sets his mind to it.” In the future,I will learn from her and never give up easily. 谢谢观赏！(
