2017年高考英语错竞技场：短文改错2.句法型错误

（Ⅰ） 下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意： 1.每句不超过两个错误； 2．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 3．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。 Hello，boys and girls ！Today，I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off.If you hear the alarm，stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside.Stay close to your teacher and classmate.Don’t panic or get out of line，and trying to remain quiet and calmly.Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire.If it’s a false alarm and there is no fire，your teacher will lead us back to the classroom.If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt，tell your teacher immediately. 【答案】 Hello，boys and girls！Today，I am going to talk what you should do when a fire alarm off.If you hear the alarm，stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside.Stay close to your teacher and .Don’t panic or get out of line，and to remain quiet and .Soon the firefighters will come and put out fire.If it’s a false alarm and there is no fire，your teacher will lead back to the classroom.If you notice that when someone is missing hurt，tell your teacher immediately. 【分析】 这是一篇实用文体，向读者介绍遇到火警时的正确做法。 【解析】 1．with→about　[talk with后面常跟指人的词，意思是“同某人交谈”。talk about意为“谈论”。] 2．go→goes　[表达客观事实通常使用一般现在时态。a fire alarm为单数名词，故谓语动词应当用单数第三人称形式。] 3．在wait之后加上for　[wait为不及物动词，后跟宾语时要加上介词for。] 4．classmate→classmates　[classmate为可数名词，此处应当用复数形式。] 5．trying→try　[根据and一词可知本句与前面的祈使句并列，所以应当用动词原形。] 6．calmly→calm　[由并列连词and可知本词与quiet都作系动词remain的表语。故词性应与quiet一致。] 7．a→the　[前文已提到火灾，这里特指那场火。] 8．us→you　[根据短文意思可知这是老师告诉同学们的一些注意事项。用的均是第二人称。] 9．去掉when　[宾语从句中使用了两个连接词，根据句意“如果你们注意到有人失踪或受伤……”可知when是多余的。] 10．and→or　[如果某人失踪了，就无法判断他受伤与否。这两个词之间是选择关系，故用or。] （Ⅱ） 下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。 注意： 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。 I was taking a train to London’s Victoria Station.I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people. Before long，a train i nspector comes to check our tickets.A passenger realized he couldn’t find his ticket but became quite upset.Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket，which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner.The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success ... ...