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课件网) Unit1 Science and Scientists Using language Writing Post reading According to the two articles, What will be included in your essay if you are writing about a great scientist Brief introduction. Life story Achievements Personalities/ qualities Writing Skills 总领：在写人物介绍时，尤其是着重于介绍其精神品质的，切记要选取该人物身上最典型的事例，用以突出人物的个性和品质。 【写作方法】 ① 首段：人物概况（Brief information -- 名字，身份，头衔）。 ② 主体：人物事迹，成就及科学家精神。(personal experience+qualities) 人物的事迹＋其体 现的科学家精神，注意事迹和精神一定要匹配； 注意事迹可以按时间顺序，一个事迹不够，事迹太多字数会超过，选取两三个即可。 ③ 尾段：总结升华，概括该人物所表现出来的科学精神及对自己的影响。 (Summary & influence-- 学习，生活，态度的影响) Sentence patterns 首段常用句型(Brief information): 1. I am going to introduce one of my favorite scientists to you. 我要向你介绍我最喜欢的一位科学家。 2. He is one of the most famous and influential scientists in… 他是在……领域最著名和有影响力的科学家之一 3. He is the first scientist to do sth. 他是第一个……的科学家。(使用不定式作定语) [试一试] 袁隆平是第一个研制出杂交水稻的科学家。 Yuan Longping is the first scientist to develop the hybrid rice. Sentence patterns 首段常用句型(Brief information): 过去分词做后置定语 1. sb, known as +头衔, is one of the greatest +身份+ in the world. 某人，被誉为…,是世界上最伟大的…之一。 【试一试】林巧稚，被誉为万婴之母，是中国最伟大的医生之一。 Lin Qiaozhi, known as “the mother of ten thousand babies”, is one of the greatest doctors in China. 定语从句 2. Sb, who is my favorite scientist, is considered to be +头衔。 某人，是我最喜欢的科学家，被誉为…. 【试一试】钱学森是我最喜欢的科学家，他被誉为导弹之父。 Qian Xuesen, who is my favorite scientist, is considered to be “the father of missile.” Sentence patterns 中段常用句型(personal experience & qualities): 1. Born in a…family in…, he… 在…年出生于…家庭，他… 2. In the course of+时间段, he met a lot of difficulties. However, he was determined and never gave up. 在……期间, 他遇到很多困难, 但是他意志坚定, 从不放弃。 3. Not only is/was/does/did he…, but also he… 他不仅……，而且…… 4. He achieved fame/became famous when he… 当…的时候，他成名了。 5. He made great contributions to… 他对……做出很大贡献。 【试一试】他对解决人们饥饿问题做出了巨大贡献。 He made great contributions to solving the problem of hunger. Sentence patterns 中段常用句型(personal experience & qualities): Useful adjectives for qualities patriotic (爱国的); devoted (奉献的); selfless (无私的); diligent (勤奋的); hard-working(勤奋的); responsible (有责任感的), tireless (孜孜不倦的); persevering (坚持不懈的) knowledgeable (学识渊博的)； determined (坚决的) gifted (有才华的)； modest (谦虚的) Sentence patterns 末段常用句型(influence): 1. He inspires me to be a person like him. 他激励我成为像他一样的人。 2. What influenced me most is…. 对我影响最深的是… 【试一试】对我影响最 ... ...
