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课件网) Continuation Writing 5R解读、3大原则，十&五句（五三十五定法） CONTENTS 读五要素，梳理情节山 十句五定，三原则填充 修改草稿，润色升级 Part1.读原文，理情节 Reading & Searching Little Notes Once again, I headed out to look for a job. Although I wasn’t very confident about the interview, I still held my head high, trying to stay hopeful under the morning sun. Before leaving, I made sure to stick a note on the fridge that read, “Son, finish your breakfast and have a good day.” Then I walked out of the door. This quiet tradition came from my father. I still remember how, before every trip, he would leave a note on my desk: “I’ll come back with gifts for you.” When I stayed up late studying, I would open my pencil box and find another note inside: “Go to bed and have a good dream.” During summer camp, I would find a little note in my pocket that said, “Take care of yourself.” Those small pieces of paper were my first understanding of love — a gentle way of reminding me that someone always cared. Reading & Searching Years later when my own son Jack was old enough to read, I continued the tradition. I left little notes throughout his life: “You are smarter than you think” in his math book, “Son, my little sun” on his bedroom door, and “Good luck at soccer” inside his shoe. He never said anything about them, but he became a happy, brave, and kind boy. That was enough for me. Then came the hardest winter of my life. My company cut our pay, and people began whispering about who might lose their jobs. I worked every day with a heavy heart, always anxious, but in the end, I was still told to leave. It was a huge shock — but things got even harder. My husband lost his job too and had to move to another city to find work. I didn’t have time to feel sad. I needed to find a new job quickly to support our family. 5R解读 Analyze the story：5Rs 1. Read for characters（人物） 2. Read for plot（情节） 3. Read for emotional changes（情感变化） 4. Read for conflict / problems（冲突/问题） 5. Read for theme（主题） characters I（mother) the son(Jack) My father My husband 步骤一：5R解读，理清脉络 Plot look for a Job ;stick a note memory: her father always left a note for her continue the tradition: leave a note for her son unemployed,husband lost his job Emotion 步骤一：5R解读，理清脉络 Theme prove of love and encouragement through small acts Conflict Internal: inner exhaustion, frustration, self-doubt, vs. the love for one's son, along with a sense of familial responsibility. External: The severe economic difficulties faced by the family (unemployment, salary cuts, separation). hopeful--anxious--heavy--exhausted--moved Part2. 五句定框架 Para.2:The apple was refreshing and sweet, and so was the note. Para.1: That evening, after another long, unsuccessful day, I came home exhausted. 可知，有人留下纸条和苹果（已读）。 可知，作者找工作失败，疲惫沮丧。 Brainstorming Step 1 定主线———构思两段主 ... ...
