高考英语读后续写（家庭亲情类）高分宝典

中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台 读后续写家庭亲情类 Ⅰ主题解读 家庭亲情类故事通常描写主人公与家人之间发生的日常生活事件。2021年新高考Ⅰ卷考查此类故事，主题为“给妈妈做母亲节早餐”。 该类故事一般分为两大类： 1.相亲相爱的锦上添花，比如纪念重要日子(如举办生日派对、母亲节、父亲节等)、父母教孩子新技能、孩子为长辈解决困难等。要求续写延续快乐有爱的语篇基调，刻画家人间的温馨举动，表达收获、开心、感恩等。 2.解决小误会/小矛盾的握手言和，比如亲子之间缺乏沟通，父母把自己的意志强加给子女，子女觉得父母做法不对，父母帮倒忙等。要求续写用原文伏笔，化解冲突，方式可以是弥补、解释、道歉、回忆等，最后冰释前嫌，握手言和。 家庭亲情类故事模型通常为： Ⅱ万能句式表达 情绪表达 1. sb. felt a great sense of +情绪名词+ welling up in sb's heart Alice felt a great sense of warmth welling up in her heart.Alice感觉有一股暖流在心里蔓延。 2.adj.+adj. ,主语+谓语+其他 Expected and delighted, they accepted the suggestion.既期待又兴奋，他们接受了这个建议。 动作表达： 1.主语+动作1+动作2 and 动作3 Alice took the tools, walked out and put the tools on the ground.Alice拿着工具，向外走去然后把工具放在了地上。 2. 主语+谓语动词，非谓语动词+其他 They talked about old memories, sharing happiness and joy.他们谈论着原来的记忆，分享着幸福和快乐。 加分表达 1. It is +强调部分+that It is love and accompany that make the family closer and closer.是陪伴和爱让家人更加亲密。 2.With+宾语(名词或者代词)+宾补（to do / doing/ done/ adj./介词短语），+主语+谓语动词+其他 With an exciting vioce, Harrison asked:....Harrison 带着激动的声音问道。 3.Not only...but also 中not only 放句首，句子使用半倒装（助动词或情态动词+主语+实义动词） Not only did it bring a chance to taste the delicioous food, but also it made them closer.这次停电不仅带给带给他们品尝美食的机会也让他们更加亲密。 升华表达 1．I keep the little plane as a reminder of my daughter’s love and also the power of words. 我保留着这架小飞机，以提醒女儿对我的爱和语言的力量。 2．Every time I faced challenges，a thought of giving up flashed in my mind，but the support of my family gave me the strength to keep going.每次面对挑战，我都想放弃，但是家人的支持给了我继续前进的力量。 3．The warm golden sunlight，flooding in through the window，together with love between my family，warmed us.温暖的金色阳光，透过窗户照进来，和家人之间的爱一起，温暖了我们。 4．Since then，my father’s plain and encouraging words have always echoed in my mind，guiding the way of my life.从那以后，父亲那句直白而鼓舞人心的话语一直在我的脑海中回响，指引着我的人生道路。 5．Following that，it gradually dawned on me that the love of mother is priceless，which nothing can match. 此后，我逐渐意识到，母亲的爱是无价的，没有什么能比得上。 Ⅲ典例剖析　(2021·新高考Ⅰ卷) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day.How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed.They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge.Th ... ...