
中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台 高考英语应用文写作满分技法全梳理 技法 1 锤词炼句 ——— 精准表达,亮点提分 语言规范是满分作文的特点,能够在没有错误的基础上,增添亮点表达。首先,要规范拼写,规避简单错误;其次,词汇基础要扎实,能够灵活使用高级词汇及语块;再次,语法知识要系统,确保正确使用各种语法结构。 增分亮点 1 词汇升级———精准用词,点亮全文 一、精准多样的动词 动词分为及物动词和不及物动词。精准的动词能够有效勾画交际场景,多样化的动词能够增加文章的生动性,恰如其分地传递信息和态度。 (普通表达)Lastly, the emergence of new energy vehicles, such as electric cars, has caused reducing pollution and promoting sustainable development. (高级表达)Lastly, the emergence of new energy vehicles, such as electric cars, has contributed/led to reducing pollution and promoting sustainable development.(2024 全国甲卷) (普通表达)These advancements show China's progress in creating a modern, efficient, and environmentally friendly transport system. (高级表达)These advancements highlight China's progress in creating a modern, efficient, and environmentally friendly transport system.(2024 全国甲卷) (普通表达)Today I want to focus on some major developments, which include shared bicycles, high-speed trains and new energy vehicles. (高级表达)Today I'd like to concentrate/centre on some major developments, which include shared bicycles, high-speed trains and new energy vehicles. (2024 全国甲卷) 二、充满表达力的名词 灵活使用一些充满表达力的名词,包括抽象意义的名词、常见动词的同根名词形式或名词词组,能够出众脱俗,为文章增色,成为得分的亮点。 (普通表达)The sunlight and the light wind made the whole scene come to life. (高级表达)The sunlight and the gentle breeze made the whole scene come to life.(2024 新高考全国卷 I) (普通表达)Known as a Chinese writer and politician in the Song Dynasty, Fan Zhongyan was highly appreciated because he did a lot for society. (高级表达)Known as a Chinese writer and politician in the Song Dynasty, Fan Zhongyan was highly appreciated because he made great contributions to society. (2023 全国甲卷) 三、丰富多彩的形容词 形容词是用来描述人或者事物的特征、性质、属性或状态的修饰性词汇,最主要的功能是修饰或者限定名词或代词。形容词的恰当使用能够为文章增色。 (普通表达)It was such a good experience that I would always remember it in my mind. (高级表达)It was such an extraordinary/a memorable experience that I would always keep it in my memory.(2024 新高考全国卷 I) (普通表达)I chose to paint a landscape featuring a calm lake surrounded by lively flowers and thick trees. (高级表达)I chose to paint a landscape featuring a calm lake surrounded by vibrant flowers and thick trees.(2024 新高考全国卷 I) 四、灵活多变的副词 副词指在句中表示行为或状态特征的词汇,主要用来作状语,修饰动词、形容词、其他副词或句子。副词的恰当使用能够提高得分的档次。 (普通表达)Firstly, shared bicycles have become a popular choice in cities, providing an eco-friendly and cost-effective way to travel short distances. (高级表达)To begin/start with, shared bicycle ... ...
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