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课件网) Writing welcome Unit Writing an Effective Personal Profile———For University Applications 1. 语法： 主谓不一致（guy who have） 冠词错误（a outgoing） 时态错误（have learned 暗示已毕业） 非谓语动词错误（pay attention to learn, love explore） 地址顺序错误（应先小后大：No. 26, Shanda Road, Jinan, Shandong Province） 2. 用语口语化：使用 Hi, guy, what's up, so, and then 等非正式表达。 3. 格式有误： 体裁：个人简历 正确格式：无称谓无落款 Common Errors 姓名 李华 年龄 17 性别 男 国籍 中国 住址 山东省济南市山大路26号 电话号码 0531－88765397 电子邮箱 LiHua1297@ 个人简介 1.在济南第一中学读书； 2．性格外向，自信，对新事物很好奇，喜欢探索大自然； 3．想成为一名设计师； 4．全神贯注于学习，想到剑桥大学学习。 假如你叫李华，正在向英国剑桥大学(Cambridge University)提出入学申请。在校方需要的相关材料中，你要准备一份个人简历。现在，请你根据下表信息，写一份个人简历。 体裁： 个人简历 时态： 一般现在时、一般将来时 你是谁： 李华 读者是谁： 剑桥大学老师 语气： 正式 □非正式 基本情况介绍（姓名、年龄、性别、国籍、住址、学校） 性格外向，自信，对新事物很好奇，喜欢探索大自然； 想成为一名设计师； 全神贯注于学习，想到剑桥大学学习。 告诉对方自己的联系方式 Introduction Body Conclusion Brainstorm 性格外向，自信，对新事物很好奇，喜欢探索大自然； outgoing - sociable, communicative, approachable. confident - self-assured, determined, proactive. curious - develop a profound interest in... like - be eager to do/ be keen on/be fond of/ be fascinated by Described as outgoing and confident, I am curious about new things and always eager to explore the nature. 利用非谓语作状语 My innate curiosity drives me to understand how things work and fuels my love for exploring the natural world. 无灵主语 想成为一名设计师 想成为 - aspire to become / aim to pursue a career as / dream of being / set my sights on becoming 为何想成为设计师 拓展 深受启发 - be inspired by the power of design to communicate ideas 创造美与功能性 - create things that are both aesthetically pleasing and functional 解决问题的途径 - see design as a powerful way to solve problems Seeing design as the perfect fusion of art and function, I dream of becoming a designer who creates meaningful solutions. 现在分词表伴随/方式 My career goal, which is to become a renowned designer, is the guiding star of my current academic efforts. 定语从句 全神贯注于学习，想到剑桥大学学习 全神贯注 - be fully absorbed in / be immersed in / devote myself completely to / concentrate wholeheartedly on 学习 - academic pursuits / my studies / acquiring knowledge 想到剑桥大学学习 - dream of studying at Cambridge University / aspire to earn a degree from Cambridge / aim to be admitted to Cambridge for further study 全神贯注于学习，想到剑桥大学学习 为何想去剑桥大学 拓展 被其学术声誉吸引 - be drawn by its world-class reputation and academic excellence 追求顶尖教育 - pursue a first-class education in my chosen field 历史与创新结合 - be attracted by its unique blend of rich history and innovative spir ... ...
