
人教英语八下Unit3 写作专项 Growing Up(成长) 写作目标 结合本单元“成长”主题,针对成长中遇到的问题给出建议,达成以下目标: 能正确使用本单元“成长问题”相关核心词汇(如lonely、trouble、habit等)及短语; 能熟练运用“should/You’d better+动词原形”(提建议)、“In this way, you can...”(说明建议的作用)等本单元重点句型; 能按“回应问题→分析问题→给出建议→表达祝愿”的逻辑完成书信体写作,贴合“成长问题与解决”的单元主题。 题目解析 体裁:书信体建议文,需以校报编辑身份给新生Ben写回信,回应其成长问题并提建议; 人称:第二人称(针对Ben)+第一人称(表达建议); 核心要求 内容:覆盖“Ben的两个问题(朋友少/英语单词难记)、对应建议及理由”2个要点; 字数:80词左右,用连词(besides、in addition)区分不同建议,提升行文连贯性。 思路点拨 书信开头:回应Ben的来信,点明他遇到的成长问题; 展开建议:针对“朋友少”和“英语单词难记”两个问题,分别用should/You’d better提建议,并说明理由; 结尾祝愿:表达对建议有用的期待,送上祝福,符合书信的交际功能。 写作模板(逐段拆解) 第一段:回应来信+点明问题(约25词) 写作目的:回应Ben的困扰,说明他遇到的两个成长问题 基础句式:I am sorry to hear that you... In your letter you said that you... because of... and you found it difficult to... 示例:I am sorry to hear that you’re having trouble getting used to middle school. In your letter you said that you felt lonely because of few friends and found it difficult to remember English words. 第二段:给出对应建议及理由(约40词) 写作目的:针对两个问题分别提建议,说明理由 基础句式:For..., I think you should... In this way, you can... Besides, you’d better... For..., you can... In addition, if you..., it will... 示例:For the first problem, I think you should join school clubs. In this way, you can make friends with the same interest. Besides, you’d better be friendly to others. For English words, you can read more stories. In addition, keeping an English diary will help you remember words. 第三段:结尾祝愿(约15词) 写作目的:表达期待与祝福,完成书信收尾 基础句式:I hope you will find these suggestions useful. Good luck with everything! 示例:I hope you will find these suggestions useful. Good luck with everything! 范文 英文 Dear Ben, I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school. In your letter you said that you always felt lonely because of having few friends, and you found it difficult to remember English words. For the loneliness, I think you should join some school clubs. In this way, you can make more friends who share the same hobbies. Besides, you’d better be active to talk with classmates—smiles always make people closer. For English words, you can read more English stories and news to learn words in use. In addition, keeping an English diary every day will make it easier for you to remember words. I hope you will find these suggestions useful. Good luck with everything! Yours, Li Hua 中文翻译 亲爱的Ben: 听说你在适应初中生活方面遇到了困难,我很抱歉。在信里你说因为朋友少总是感到孤独,而且觉得记英语单词很难。 针对孤独的问题,我认为你应 ... ...
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