北师大版英语七年级下册 Unit 4-6 单元话题作文 Unit 4: Landmarks (名胜古迹) 题目预测 假设你是李华,你的美国笔友Peter计划暑假来中国旅游。请你给他写一封电子邮件,向他推荐一个你家乡或中国著名的地标建筑(如长城、故宫、黄鹤楼等)。 内容包括: 1. 地标的名称及地理位置; 2. 它的历史或外观特征; 3. 推荐理由(文化价值、景色等)。 注意: 1. 词数80词左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。 Dear Peter, I’m so glad to hear that you are coming to China. I’d like to introduce the Great Wall to you. It is one of the most famous landmarks in the world. The Great Wall is located in the north of China. It has a long history of more than 2,000 years. It looks like a giant dragon winding through mountains and forests. In the past, it was built to protect the country. Now, it is a symbol of Chinese history and culture. It is amazing to walk on the wall and enjoy the beautiful scenery. As the saying goes, "He who doesn't reach the Great Wall is not a true man." I’m sure you will have a wonderful time there. Yours, Li Hua 【总体分析】 ① 题材:介绍地标建筑的说明文(Expository Writing),兼具书信格式。 ② 时态:以一般现在时为主(介绍位置、现状、价值),涉及建造历史时使用一般过去时。 ③ 提示点覆盖:涵盖了位置(location)、历史(history)、外观(appearance)及推荐理由(value),完全扣题。 【写作步骤】 第一步:开篇引入。 表达欢迎之情,并直接点出要推荐的地标名称。 第二步:详细介绍。 从地理位置(be located in)、历史年代(history)、外观形态(looks like)和功能价值(protect/symbol)四个维度展开描述。 第三步:引用升华。 引用名言(习语)增加文采,并表达美好祝愿,自然结尾。 【亮点词汇】 短语 date back to / has a history of (追溯到/有……的历史) ——— 介绍地标历史的必备词汇。 名词 symbol (象征) ——— 升华建筑的文化意义。 动词 wind (蜿蜒) ——— 生动地描绘长城在山间延伸的形态。 形容词 man-made (人造的) ——— 强调工程的宏伟(Unit 4 重点词)。 【高分句型】 It looks like a giant dragon winding through mountains and forests. 解析:运用明喻(simile)和现在分词短语作后置定语,画面感极强。 It was built to protect the country. 解析:使用一般过去时的被动语态(was built)和动词不定式表目的(to protect),语法结构规范。 He who doesn't reach the Great Wall is not a true man. 解析:恰当引用俗语“不到长城非好汉”,体现文化底蕴。 【结构亮点】 空间与时间的结合: 既有地理位置的静态描述,又有历史长河的时间跨度,使介绍立体饱满。 情感递进: 从客观事实介绍过渡到主观推荐,逻辑顺畅。 Unit 5: Now and Then (今昔巨变) 题目预测 时代在发展,生活在变迁。学校英语校刊正在举办以“Great Changes in My Hometown”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿。 内容包括: 1. 过去家乡的样子(房屋、道路、交通等); 2. 现在家乡的变化(高楼、环境、生活便利度等); 3. 你对这些变化的感受。 注意: 1. 词数80词左右; 2. 包含以上要点,可适当发挥。 Great Changes in My Hometown My hometown has changed a lot over the years. In the past, life was quite different. Five years ago, there were many old, small houses. The roads were narrow and dirty. People usually went out by bike or on foot because the ... ...
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