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课件网) 读后续写 掉入冰窟,转危为安 1 What would you do if your friend fell into an ice hole About a half-mile behind our Minnesota farm lay a pond. In summer, my brother Harry and I would run through a stand of oak trees to skip stones there. The pond wore a collar of black mud. It was not a place for swimming. In late summer, the pond would be covered by a green and bubbly scum (起泡的浮渣). Sometimes a strong, unpleasant smell rose from it. We stayed away. When winter came, the pond was once again an inviting place. One day when ice covered it, Harry said to me, "Try walking across." The ice looked solid. No water showed through it, but I hesitated. "Go ahead." Harry urged. "Try it. You’re lighter than I am. If the ice holds, we can run and slide carefully on it. It’ll be fun." I wanted to please Harry, and I thought about the fun of a long slide on the ice. I began to slide across the pond. In the middle of the pond, the ice gave way with a sudden crack (裂缝)! I stretched out (伸展) my arms. The next thing I knew I was hanging on to the edge of a hole in the ice by arms outstretched on the ice. From my shoulders down I hung in icy water. I thought of the bottom of the pond. I knew it would be black and awful down there, full of mud and maybe rotting creatures. I tried to climb out of the hole, but when I got a knee on the ice, it broke like window glass. Again and again I tried to get out. Again and again the ice broke into pieces. The hole widened. I was wearing a coat of heavy material. As it became completely wet, it dragged me down. I was tired of the struggle and rested with my arms stretched out on the ice. I looked at Harry on shore. He seemed rooted to the spot. "I can’t get out!" I screamed when I caught some breath. Harry turned and ran from the pond_____ The moment I crashed through the kitchen door, sobbing, mum rushed over._____ A story when where who what how why Reading for basic informantion Reading for basic informantion I Harry a pond lay behind our farm sometime smelly有臭味的 an inviting place brothers In summer In winter contrast Setting Development Rising action Climax Events A. The pond was so inviting in winter that I decided to slide across it to please my brother. B. I was hanging on to the edge on the ice. C. With the ice cracking, I fell into a hole in the ice. The pond behind our farm was not suitable for swimming in the summer. Harry turned and ran from the pond… D A C,B Reading for plot E Falling action Resolution解决 Ending Reading for plot Changes of feelings Time Events feelings 1. Before I slid across the pond Harry _____ me to go first because of my lighter weight. In order to _____him and have fun, I _____. I felt _____ but_____. 2. When I was in the middle of the pond With ice _____ suddenly, I fell into a hole. Arms _____ on the ice and body _____in the icy water, I was _____ in the hole. I got _____ and _____. 3. When I tried to save by mysel ... ...