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课件网) Detailed Descriptions in Continuation Writing 读后续写之细节描写 She is/feels_____ Her eyes are filled with sadness and fear. emotion（情绪/表情） action（动作） She huddled(蜷缩) in the corner Poor and Helpless How do you think the little girl feels How can we make a story vivid (生动） hugged herself tightly. cold//hungry 1. Add adverbs(副词） The little girl walked _____in the street and shouted “Matches, matches” , hoping that someone would buy her matches. slowly Action（动作） quickly, gently, carefully,aimlessly, silently,joyfully, excitedly，angrily ，sadly，surprisedly... excitedly smoothly excitedly gently (2023·新课标I&II卷读后续写)“I knew you’d win! I am proud of you. You made it!” he said_____ . (2022·新课标I&II卷读后续写) I said _____, “No one can change your mind, except yourself. gently (2024·新课标I&II卷读后续写)I told him that thanks to his generosity and timely help, everything had gone _____. smoothly The little girl walked slowly in the street and shouted “Matches, matches” , hoping that someone would buy her matches. Action（动作） 2. Use Action Chains (动作链) walked shouted hoping 谓语并列（V1, V2 and V3） 一般过去时（did） The little girl took out a match, struck it and saw a warm stove in the flame. 谓语并列+非谓语（V1 and V2, V3ing） 小女孩拿出一根火柴,划燃了它然后看到火焰中有一个 温暖的火炉。 took out struck saw 老师走上前，拍了拍我的肩膀，说：“有志者，事竟成。”（2023新高考卷1）（ ） He _____ forward and_____ me on the shoulder, _____ "Where there is a will, there is a way." stepped patted saying 谓语并列（V1, V2 and V3） 谓语并列+非谓语（V1 and V2, V3ing） I _____ dad, proudly_____ my own money and _____ it to him. walked to 我走近爸爸，骄傲地拿出我自己的钱递给他。(2021·浙江卷） ( ) took out of handed Emotion（情绪） 她又划了一根火柴，看到了一只烤鹅。一种饥饿感涌上她的心头。她又渴望又兴奋地伸出了手。然而，令她失望的是，这美妙的景象瞬间就消失了。 She struck another match and saw a roasted goose. A feeling of hunger welled up in her. Eager and excited, she reached her hands out. However, to her disappointment, this wonderful sight disappeared in an instant. a feeling of/a sense of+情绪名词welled up in＋sb 一种...之感涌上心头 情绪类形容词，sb did sth To one’s +情绪名词，sb did sth 令某人...是 suprise,delight,disappointed... shocked,amazed,annoyed, astonished,confused, delighted,disappointed... 2.感到坚定的和受到鼓舞的，David抬起头，感激地看着我。[2022全国1卷读后续写] _____and _____,David raised his head, looking at me with gratitude. Determined inspired 1.当大卫终于下定决心继续赛跑时，一阵喜悦(delight)感在我心中涌起。[2022全国1卷读后续写] _____ when David finally became determinedto continue the race. A sense of delight welled up in me 令大家高兴(joy)的是,他到达了终点线.[2022全国1卷读后续写] _____, he reached the finish line. To everyone's joy dialogue（对话） “Grandmother!” cried the little girl, “oh, take me with you! I know you will go ... ...
