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课件网) Continuation writing Animals and mankind --helping animals cute fierce 类型一：可爱型动物故事情节 人与动物和谐相处，相亲互助 类型二：凶猛型动物故事情节 人与动物发生冲突，成功脱险 类型一：可爱型动物故事情节 ———人与动物和谐相处，相亲互助 可爱型动物，如狗，鸟等，主要构思陪伴、忠诚，或者人救助动物生命，动物（主要是狗）救人的生命等故事情节。 日常家养 人救动物 动物救人 人狗和谐：父母决定给Poppy买一条小狗作伴，帮助Poppy摆脱孤独和想念的故事（2020年1月浙江高考） 人猫和谐：作者的丈夫从讨厌猫到向猫求助，赶走土拨鼠的故事（2021年3月一模） 人狗和谐：作者和作者的丈夫帮助了一条流浪狗的故事（2023年三新联盟高二期末） 类型二：凶猛型动物故事情节 ———人与动物发生冲突，成功脱险 凶猛的动物，如狼、熊等，一般会给人造成生命威胁，所以主要是以遇险、脱险的故事情节为主。 人狼大战：骑车旅途遭遇狼wolf追赶，脱险经历（2017年6月浙江高考） 人战：北极探险者给北极熊拍照，遭遇polar bear追赶的惊险经历（2020年6 月浙江高考） “Three step” 1 2 3 Text Analysis Plot Design Language Expression Who: _____ Where: _____ What: ①An unknown dog_____near my house. ②My husband and I_____ a rescue plan for the little dog. ③After a few weeks, we wanted to _____ the dog _____. I，a dog，my husband a farm Step I Text Analysis wandering formulated persuade inside Beginning Developing Climax Resolution Ending STORY MOUNTAIN Step II Plot Design Beginning Developing Climax A unknown dog wandering near my house. My husband and I formulated a rescue plan for the little dog. After a few weeks, we wanted to persuade the dog inside. Beginning Developing Climax Resolution Ending A unknown dog wandering near my house. My husband and I formulated a rescue plan for the little dog. After a few weeks, we wanted to persuade the dog inside. STORY MOUNTAIN A few nights afterward, when it was pouring, I opened the door and the dog was there. Moments later, holding the hot dog, my husband announced, “The dog is back.”. Love Which ending is reasonable Someone came and found the dog. He took the dog away. My husband and I finally managed to get the dog in. The dog refused to go home, choosing to withstand the wind and rain. A good ending for the continuation writing task should 1 sum up and solve the problem 2 be a “happy”ending 3 not involve irrelevant people Step 1: 先写全文最后一句 （根据主题，确定大方向） Step 2:再写第一段最后一句 (根据第2段第1句来写衔接句） Step 3:再写每段第二句 (根据每段首句，确定本段情节走向) Step 4:最后补全续写每段的中间内容 (续写核心事件,丰富故事情节 每段共写7-8句话，80字左右) How to write a continuation writing --两首两尾定框架 How to write a continuation writing？ Step 1: 先写全文最后一句 Despite the chill autumn wind, our home was filled with the warmth of love. （根据主题，确定大方向） Step 2:再写第一段最后一句 （根据第2段第1句来写衔接句） the first sentence of para.2： Moments later, holding the hot dog, my husband announced, “The dog is back.”. Thinking: What did my husband do？ Hint at the result of para.1: My hus ... ...
