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课件网) Unit 1 Reading for Writing Are all the parts of a letter included and organized in a good order Do you give reasons for the advice Do you use proper expressions(适当的表达) to give suggestions Do you use commas(逗号) and stops(点号) correctly Any problems appeared in your letter Communicative Objectives: write a suggestion letter assess drafts from other students Learning Objectives Language Objectives: use sentence patterns related to making suggestions proficiently Production Task Write a suggestion letter to Tom to help him make new friends in his new school. 10th September 2018 Dear worried friends, All the best, Susan Luo Date Greeting Body Close Signature Read the letter and answer questions. What is Worried Friend’s problem 2. What suggestions does Susan Luo give to Worried Friend 3. What other kinds of advice would you give What is Worried Friend’s problem His friend, Chen Lei, plays computer games too often and spends too much time online. 2. What suggestions does Susan Luo give to Worried Friend I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour. It is not … family life. I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies. Why not discuss the problem together Suggestion + Explanation = Convincing(有说服力的) Points 3. What other kinds of advice would you give Join in clubs Extra-curricular activities Do sports Show your self-discipline… Go camping A. I know what the problem is. B. I understand how you feel. C. This is my advice and reason(s). D. I think my advice will help. 3. Mark the parts of the letter that match the following points. Para. 1 Para. 2 A & B C & D Body 1.建议信常用开头(照应材料,表明写作意图) ： ①I am writing to express my views concerning... ②After I read your letter, I am sorry to know that... ③I am writing to you for the purpose of … ④I am very glad to hear that you want to... 2.表达建议常用语： ①I think you should … ②I would like to suggest/recommend that… ③ If I were you, I would… ④Why not … / How (What) about doing … 3.结尾段常用语： ①In the end, I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful. ②I believe you will take my advice into consideration. ③I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions. ④I feel that it would be beneficial if you stick to it. 4.常用过渡语： First,/Firstly,/ Secondly,/ Then,/ After that（之后）,/ In the end,/ Finally（最后）... Meanwhile, /What’s more,/ In addition,/ Besides,/ Furthermore（还有、另外）... Are all the parts of a letter included and organized in a good order Does the writer give reasons for the advice Does the writer use proper expressions to give suggestions Does the writer use commas and stops correctly Is the handwriting easy to read Items Scores (1-5) 1. Are all the parts of a letter included and organized in a good order 2. Does the writer give reasons for the advice 3. Does the writer use proper expressions to give suggestions 4. Does the wri ... ...
