(
课件网) Seeing the true north via rail： Toronto and Montreal Reading for Writing Unit 4 Journey across a vast land What do you know about Toronto and Montreal Have you seen the beautiful scenery in Canada Toronto Montreal Lead-in Lead-in Writing Travel Journal 假定你是李华，你的英国笔友 Tom 来信询问你假期的旅行情况，希望你分享一次难忘的旅行经历。请你给他写一封回信。 要点提示: 1.写信目的; 2.在旅行的见闻感受等; 3.旅游的好处并推荐父母也来玩。 注意: 1.词数80左右。可适当补充细节使行文流畅。 2.不得出现真实姓名、校名等个人信息。 短文可以分为三部分： 第一部分： 第二部分： 第三部分： 篇章结构： 1.时态：正文_____ ,景色，感想_____ 2.旅游进程时要有一个清晰明确的顺序。 注意事项： 过去时 现在时 开门见山，旅行概况。 重点介绍旅游过程，描述所见所闻。 可适当表达自己的内心情感写景+抒情 谈此次旅行的感受，总体评价。 who when where what how Para.1 Para.2 Para.3 Greeting and purpose What you experience Ending and signature A letter about your journey Outline what you saw what you did what you hear how you felt Some useful phrases Pre-writing be famous/well-known for natural scenery a place of interest a scenic spot be surrounded by broaden one’s horizons enrich one’s experience enjoy a pleasant journey can’ t wait to do sth share...with... a variety of landscapes have a/the chance to do multi-culture 因……而闻名 自然景色 名胜古迹 旅游景点 被……环绕 开阔某人的视野 丰富某人的经验 旅途愉快 迫不及待做某事 与……分享…… 各种各样的风景 有做……的机会 多元文化 1.How to greet in a letter Sentence structures 基础表达 How is everything going I’m glad to receive the email you sent me yesterday. 高级表达 I am more than delighted to hear from you. Receiving your email, I feel extremely excited and I wonder how you are getting along these days. Para.1: 问候 点题 ＋ 基础表达 How is everything going I’m glad to share my travel experience in Canada with you, because you have always been interested in it. How is everything going I ... share my _____ (经历 / 体验) in _____ (地点) with you, because you ..... 最近怎么样？我……想和你分享我的_____（经历 / 体验）在_____（地点）的经历，因为 ..... 你。 【练一练】 一切都好吗？我很高兴和你分享我在加拿大的旅行经历，因为你一直对它很感兴趣。 Para.2: 你的体验 基础表达 ①First of all, we _____ (交通方式) to _____ (地点), where we visited some _____ (形容词) _____ (地点类名词) _____ (doing 短语，表展示 / 售卖 / 包含的内容). 【练一练】 首先，我们飞往温哥华，在那里参观了一些出售手工艺品及古董的绝佳商店。 First of all, we flew to Vancouver, where we visited some wonderful shops selling crafts and antiques. Para.2: 你的体验 基础表达 ②After that, we went on to _____ (地点). It was its _____ (名词，描述景物特征) that took our breath away with its _____ (形容词，描述美感) beauty. 【练一练】 之后我们去了路易斯湖（Lake Louise）。其蔚蓝色的湖水呈现出令人叹为观止的美丽景色，实在让人惊叹不已。 After that, we went on to Lake Louise.It was its blue water that took our breath away with its exceptiona ... ...
