(课件网) 主题语境：探险活动 探险类记叙文要求学生能够根据命题的要求，记叙发生在自己或他人身上的一次探险经历。探险类记叙文写作步骤如下： (1)开头段通常用两三句话交代探险的时间、地点和背景，起到开门见山的作用； (2)主体段应详细说明探险的经过或过程； (3)结尾段应对此次探险作出评价并表达感受，这部分应与首段呼应。 首段：交代探险的时间、地点和背景 1.Last year I had an adventure with my classmates，which left/made a deep impression on me. 2.During the summer vacation，my family together with me went on an expedition/adventure to a mountain. 主体段：详细说明探险的经历或过程 1.In spite of/Despite all the difficulties，we finally managed to reach the destination. 2.We were thrilled to enjoy such a wonderful view/scene. 3.Failing to rise to my feet/Unable to stand，I decided to sit down and have a rest. 4.Using the compass we carried，we ended up losing our way/getting lost in the forest. 尾段：对此次探险作出评价或表达感受 1.I will never forget the day which/that we spent on the farm. 2.This is the most interesting/wonderful experience that I have never had before. 3.The exploration impressed me a lot.Although many years have passed，I still remember the experience as if it happened yesterday. 4.I will never forget this experience，for it taught me a vivid lesson. 假设你是李华，去年暑假和父母去了英国法恩群岛(Farne Islands)，旅行时经历了人生第一次潜水。请写一篇短文记录这一次经历，并写出所思、所想、所获。 1.潜水地点是英国法恩群岛； 2.与海豹嬉戏； 3.潜水有益于身体健康，磨炼意志。 注意：写作词数应为80个左右。 ——— [审题谋篇] [遣词造句] Ⅰ.对接单元词汇 1.____ n. 惊险，刺激 2.____ n. 雄性动物 3._____ adj. 被迷住的，被吸引住的 4._____ v. 使吃惊，使惊讶 5._____ adv. 逐渐地，逐步地 6._____ v. 环绕，围绕 thrill male fascinated astonish gradually surround Ⅱ.巧用单元句式、语法完成句子 1.说到冒险经历，我第一时间想到了去年在法恩群岛刺激的潜水经历。 When it comes to adventure，_____ came into my mind first. 2.这是一次难忘的精彩经历，我将永远不会忘记它。 It was _____，I would never forget. 3.我正在海中潜水，这时，一只雄性海豹出现了。 I was diving in the sea_____. 4.起初我大吃一惊，但是慢慢地被它迷住了。 At first I _____，but_____. the thrilling diving experience on the Farne Islands an unforgettable and wonderful experience when a male seal appeared was astonished gradually I was fascinated by it 5.我原以为它会伤害我，结果发现它既可爱又友好。 I thought it would hurt me，but _____it was lovely and friendly. 6.我被一群海豹围绕着，我们一起开心地游来游去。 I_____ a group of seals，and we swam around happily together. 7.游泳之后我如此疲惫，以至于上岸后很快睡着了。 I was _____I fell asleep soon after I was back on the beach. 8.尽管疲惫，我仍觉得这次潜水经历的确值得再尝试一次。 Though I was tired，I still thought it_____. it turned out that was surrounded by so tired after swimming that was worth trying again [亮点提升] 1.用 “such...that...” 改写句2。 _____ 2.用倒装句改写句8。 _____ It was such an unforgettable and wonderfu ... ...
