(
课件网) 第5课时 Writing 【话题导航】 本单元教材写作情境为“如何处理压岁钱”,属于“人与自我”主题范畴中的“做人与做事”这一主题群,涉及子主题“货币常识、理财意识”等。 【典型例题】 每年春节,每个孩子都能收到来自长辈的压岁钱(lucky money)。请你结合自己的实际情况写一篇文章英语短文,词数80以上,文中不能出现真实校名和人名。 要点: 1. 你的压岁钱的来源和用途; 2. 合理使用压岁钱的建议(至少3点); 3. 呼吁大家节约用钱,把自己的压岁钱用在最需要、最有意义的地方。 【审题指导】 ★审主题: 使用压岁钱 ★审体裁: 记叙文 ★审人称: 第一人称 ★审时态: 一般现在时 ★审要点: 何时获得压岁钱、压岁钱花在哪些地方、如何使压岁钱用得有意义等 【思路点拨】 Be Wise with Lucky Money 来源和 用途 I get some lucky money at ... 使用的 建议 First, we should save ... We can’t buy ...; Second, we can buy ...; At last, we can use money to ... 倡议与 呼吁 Let’s manage it well! 【素材储备】 1. 花费一些钱在…… spend some money on ... 2. 充分利用 make good use of 4. 帮助有需要的孩子 help children in need 5. 管理好我们的金钱 manage our money well spend some money on ... make good use of help children in need manage our money well 【范文展示】 I get some lucky money at the Spring Festival every year. I usually spend some money on books, school things, shoes and clothes. To make good use of lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money. We can’t buy everything we like. Second, we can buy some presents for our parents and teachers, so we can show our love to them. At last, we can use money to help children in need. Helping others makes us happy. Let’s manage our money well! 【名师点拨】 文章内容丰富,不仅描述自己压岁钱的来源和用途,也提出合理使用压岁钱的建议,并发出be wise with lucky money的倡议。文章规范准确地使用spend ... on/in, make good use of lucky money, help children in need等短语,同时first, second, at last等表顺序,使文章层次清晰,叙述有条理,逻辑性强。 【实战演练】 压岁钱不仅仅是红包里的现金,更是长辈的一份关爱和祝福。请你根据图表提示,以“How to Manage Lucky Money”为题,写一篇英语短文。 注意: 1. 词数80左右,文中须包含上图提示的所有信息,可适当发挥(开头已给出,不计入总词数); 2. 意思连贯,表达清楚; 3. 文中不能透露个人真实姓名和学校名称。 How to Manage Lucky Money Lucky money is a gift from our elders with their love and wishes. To make it more meaningful, we can do these. First, save some money for the future. We should keep some money for a rainy day. Second, use some to buy school things. This can help us learn more and do better in school. Third, we can also give some to help others in need. Helping others brings us joy. Lastly, spend a little on what we like. It’s OK to have fun with our lucky money! First, save some money for the future. We should keep some money for a rainy day. Second, use some to buy school things. This can help us learn more and do better in school. Third, we can also give some to help others in need. Helping others brings us joy. Lastly, spend a little on what we like. It ... ...
