
江苏省盐城市、南京市2025-2026学年高三上学期期末调研测试 (南京盐城一模) 英语试题 应用文写作解析 题目(2026南京盐城一模) 假定你是李华,上周你参加了市美术馆在你校组织的“艺术进校园”活动。请给你的英国朋友Alex写一封邮件分享此次经历,内容包括:(1)活动内容;(2)你的感想。 注意:(1)写作词数应为80左右;(2)请在答颗卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Alex, I’m writing to share with you the “Art Comes to Campus” activity at our school last week. _____ Yours, Li Hua 官方范文学习 Dear Alex, I’m writing to share with you the “Art Comes to Campus” activity at our school last week. It was organized by the city art museum to bring art closer to the students. I was really impressed by the remarkable paintings and intricate sculptures, which provided a chance for me to appreciate the artistic techniques behind these works. What excited me most was that I even tried my hand at some simple sketching! The activity not only refined my taste in art, but inspired me to look at the world through an artist’s eyes. I’d love to hear if you have participated in similar events at your school. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 语料积累 1. 亮点词汇 Art Comes to Campus:活动名称表达地道,符合校园活动常用说法 organized by the city art museum:用 organized by 清晰说明活动主办方,表述专业 remarkable paintings and intricate sculptures:用 remarkable(非凡的)和 intricate(精巧复杂的)精准描述艺术品,词汇丰富高级 appreciate the artistic techniques:appreciate 此处表示 “欣赏、品鉴”,比单纯用 enjoy 更贴合语境,体现艺术鉴赏的深度 tried my hand at some simple sketching:固定搭配 try one's hand at 表示 “尝试做某事”,比 try to do 更生动自然 refined my taste in art:refine 表示 “提升、精进”,taste in art 表示 “艺术品味”,搭配地道,展现活动带来的个人成长 through an artist’s eyes:用比喻表达 “从艺术家的视角”,让感受更有画面感 2. 高分句式 It was organized by the city art museum to bring art closer to the students. 被动语态清晰说明活动背景和目的,结构完整,逻辑严谨。 I was really impressed by the remarkable paintings and intricate sculptures, which provided a chance for me to appreciate the artistic techniques behind these works. 非限制性定语从句 which 衔接自然,既描述展品特点,又说明其带来的价值,句式丰富有层次。 What excited me most was that I even tried my hand at some simple sketching! 主语从句 What excited me most 突出个人感受的重点,比普通陈述句更有感染力。 The activity not only refined my taste in art, but inspired me to look at the world through an artist’s eyes. not only...but (also)... 并列结构清晰呈现活动的双重收获,逻辑分明,表达简洁有力。 写作指导与拓展 【1】如何写好英语应用文中的活动经历 想让活动经历介绍更出彩,重点是要搭建清晰的叙事结构。 1、开头:自然引入活动 直接点明活动名称、时间、背景,让读者快速了解核心信息。 示例:Last week, our school joined hands with the city art museum to hold the“Art Comes to Campus” activity aiming to bring art closer to students. 2、主体:分层次讲清过程 可以按 “活动整体安排 → 个人参与环节 → 印象最深的细节” 的顺序展开 ... ...
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