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课件网) UNIT1 The secret of happiness writing Step 1: 审好题 审人称，审时态 Step 2: 列题纲 三段式：总-分-总 Step 3: 写好句 连词成句 Step 4: 成篇章 连句成篇 写作步骤 赠人玫瑰,手留余香。我们无法帮助每个人, 但每个人都能对他人有所帮助。某英文网站正在开展以“Helping others makes me happy”为题的征文活动。请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈生活中你曾经帮助他人的经历和感悟。 Step 1: 审好题 1. 审人称：人称以第 人称为主 2. 审体裁: _____ 3. 审时态：时态以 _____ 为主 一 一般过去时 记叙文 写作任务 记叙文写作指导 Setting: who, when, where The problem The solution Feelings 记叙文写作指导 记叙文六要素(5W1H)：讲述事件的时间、地点、人物、起因、经过及结果，即五个 “W” (when, where, who, why, what) 和一个 “H” (how感受收获) Beginning: Setting Climax: The solution Ending: Lessons or feelings Rising action: The problem Falling action: The result Who When What Why Where 记叙文写作指导 高分技巧：正确使用连接词 We had a picnic. We took delicious food. We played games together. We sang and danced. We went home happily.（低分） Last Sunday, we had a picnic. First, we took delicious food. Then, we played games together. After that, we sang and danced. Finally, we went home happily.It was such a wonderful day.（高分） 表时间顺序（最常用）： One day, _____. First, _____. Then, _____. Next, _____. After that, _____. Finally, _____. 使用连接词能让故事条理清晰，使文章更加流畅自然。 段落布局 Beginning Body Ending 开门见山：点题，引出故事。 正文：讲出故事，描述自己的助人经历。 结尾：阐述助人结果及个人感悟。 Step 2: 列提纲（三段式） Who, when, where Why What problem How to solve ... is important because ... Helping others can ... From this experience, I ... 起因 经过 结果 写作任务 写作任务 ask for help try one's best to do Step 3: 写好句→词句积累 1. 嘲笑某人: 2. 帮助他人: 3. 决定做: 4. 寻求帮助: 5. 尽力做某事: 6. 擅长: 7. 花费时间做某事: 8.复习: 9. 起源于: 10.行善: laugh at sb. help sb. with/do sth. decide to do spring from do good go over be good at (sb.) spend time on sth /in doing sth. 助人行为: 写作任务 It made me feel adj. be full of Step 3: 写好句→词句积累 11. 感动的: 12. 难忘的: 13. 担心: 14. 让我感到...: 15. 充满: 16. 做...感到...: 17. 做...是困难的: moved/touched unforgettable be worried about feel it adj. to do sth. it's hard/difficult for sb. to do sth. 情感描述: 写作任务 Happiness springs from doing good and helping others. As the saying goes, “The rose is in her hand, the flavor in mine.” Keep love in your heart. A life without it is like a sunless garden. 1.快乐源于行善。 2.赠人玫瑰，手留余香。 3.心中要有爱。没有爱的生活就像没有阳光的家园。 Love is the key to happiness. 4.爱是幸福的关键。 Let’s write 1.众所周知，生活中充满快乐。 _____ 关键词： as we all know 2.帮助他人也会让我们自己快乐。 _____ 关键词： As we all know, life is full of happiness.. Helping others can also make ourselves happy. be full of help others 3.我也有一次如此难忘的经历。 _____ 关键词： I had such an unforgettable experience. unforgettable e ... ...
