沪教版英语七年级下册单元话题作文 UNIT 1 People around us Topic 1: A Person I Like (介绍一位你喜欢的人) 【题目要求】 生活中有些人对我们来说非常重要(Why are some people in your life important )。本单元的写作任务是“写一篇文章介绍一位你喜欢的人(Writing an article about a person you like)”。请你以“A Person I Like”为题,为学校英文网站的专栏投稿,介绍一位你身边的家人、老师或社区里的人。 要点: 1. 他/她是谁(Who is he / she ),以及他/她的职业; 2. 他/她的外貌和性格特点是什么(What is he / she like ); 3. 他/她经常做什么或经常说什么(What does he / she do or say ); 4. 你的看法:你为什么喜欢他/她(What do you think of him / her )。 要求: 1. 必须包括以上所有要点,并可适当发挥; 2. 正确使用本单元的核心语法:定冠词 (The definite article the),并运用 通过提问梳理思路 的写作技巧; 3. 词数80词左右。 【写作提示】 亮点词汇:cheerful (开朗的), patient (耐心的), listen carefully (仔细倾听), give sb. lots of support (给某人许多支持), amazing (令人惊叹的)。 语法及句型: 1. 本单元核心语法:使用定冠词 the 特指某些人或事物 (如:the person I like most, play the piano)。 2. 句型:The person I like most is... / He always says, "..." / I wish I could be like him. 【学生作答区】 【必背范文】 A Person I Like The person I like most is my dad. He works as a doctor in a hospital. He is tall and wears glasses. My dad is always cheerful and patient. He is very busy with his work, but he always spends time with me on the weekend. When I have problems with my study, he listens to me carefully and gives me lots of support. He often says, "Keep trying, and you will be successful." I think my dad is an amazing person. He is my hero, and I wish I could be like him in the future. 【题目解析】 [总体分析] ① 题材:本文是一篇写人的记叙文。 ② 时态:全文以“一般现在时”为主。 ③ 提示:本题完美契合沪教版七下 Unit 1 Writing 模块 "Writing an article about a person you like" 的核心任务。要求学生通过回答提纲问题(Who, What is he like, What does he do, What does he say, What do you think)来构建文章结构。 [写作步骤] 第一步:开篇点题,介绍最喜欢的人是爸爸,以及他的职业和外貌; 第二步:具体描写他的性格(cheerful, patient),他经常做的事(倾听、给予支持),以及他常说的话(Keep trying); 第三步:总结全文,表达对父亲的敬佩之情。 [亮点词汇] ① cheerful and patient 开朗且有耐心的 ② give me lots of support 给我许多支持 ③ keep trying 继续努力 / 坚持尝试 [高分句型] ① The person I like most is my dad. / He works as a doctor in a hospital. (准确使用了本单元核心语法:定冠词 the 和不定冠词 a 的正确用法) ② When I have problems with my study, he listens to me carefully and gives me lots of support. (使用 when 引导的时间状语从句,并精准使用了本单元目标短语 listen carefully 和 give lots of support) Topic 2: My Favourite Teacher (我最喜欢的老师) 【题目要求】 在我们的成长过程中,老师扮演着极其重要的角色。本单元的阅读篇章向我们介绍了令人敬佩的李老师 (Mr Li)。请结合阅读课文,以“My Favourite Teacher”为题,用英语写一篇短文介绍你最喜欢的一位老师。 要点: 1. 老师的姓名以及教授的科目; 2. 老师的性格特征 ... ...
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