科普版英语七年级下册单元话题作文 UNIT 10 Lending a Helping Hand学案（原卷版＋解析版）

科普版英语七年级下册单元话题作文 UNIT 10 Lending a Helping Hand Topic 1: A Community Service Activity (记叙一次社区志愿服务活动) 【题目要求】 本单元的核心话题是“伸出援助之手 (Lending a Helping Hand)”。单元的写作任务是“写一篇关于社区服务活动的文章 (Writing about a community service activity)”。假如你是李华，上周末你们社区组织了一次名为“Lending a Helping Hand”的志愿服务活动。请你根据以下提示写一篇英语短文，向校刊英文版投稿。 要点： 1. 时间地点人物：上周六下午，你和朋友们在社区公园参加志愿服务； 2. 活动内容： - 你在草坪上捡垃圾并放入垃圾袋 (pick up the litter, put the rubbish into rubbish bags)； - 你的朋友认真清扫了街道 (sweep the street)； - 其他一些志愿者种植了小树 (plant trees)； 3. 你的感受：虽然很累，但是觉得活动非常有意义，我们的社区变得更美了。 要求： 1. 必须包括以上所有要点，并可适当发挥； 2. 正确使用本单元的核心语法：一般过去时 (The simple past tense) 叙述过去发生的事情； 3. 词数80词左右。 【写作提示】 亮点词汇：volunteer activity (志愿活动), pick up the litter (捡垃圾), put... into... (把……放进……), sweep the street (扫街), meaningful (有意义的), tired but happy (累并快乐着)。 语法及句型： 1. 引入活动背景：Last Saturday afternoon, my friends and I took part in a community service activity. 2. 叙述活动过程 (注意一般过去时)：I picked up the litter... My friend swept the street. Other volunteers planted trees. 3. 表达感受：Although we were tired, we felt very happy because... 【学生作答区】 【必背范文】 A Community Service Activity Last Saturday afternoon, my friends and I took part in a community service activity in our neighborhood. The theme of the activity was "Lending a Helping Hand". We did a lot of things to make our community better. First, I picked up the litter on the grass and put the rubbish into rubbish bags. My friend Xiao Ming swept the street carefully. Next, some other volunteers planted young trees in the community park. After a few hours of hard work, the park looked very clean and beautiful. Although we were a little tired, we felt very happy. It was a really meaningful experience for us. 【题目解析】 [总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，描写过去参加的一次志愿服务经历。 ② 时态：全文必须以“一般过去时”为主。 ③ 提示：本题完美契合科普版七下 Unit 10 Reading for Writing 模块 "A community service activity" 的核心任务。直接调用了课文 “Changes in My Community” 中的原汁原味语料。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开篇点题，交代上周六下午在社区参加了名为“伸出援助之手”的志愿活动； 第二步：详细记叙活动过程，正确使用动词的过去式（picked up, swept, planted）来描述捡垃圾、扫地和种树的过程，并体现出先后顺序； 第三步：总结全文，抒发感受，劳动的疲惫被让社区变美的成就感所取代。 [亮点词汇] ① take part in 参加 ② pick up the litter 捡起垃圾 ③ meaningful experience 有意义的经历 [高分句型] ① I picked up the litter on the grass and put the rubbish into rubbish bags. (运用并列谓语，生动且准确地运用了一般过去时) ② Although we were a little tired, we felt very happy. (使用了 Although 引导的让步状语从句，表达“累并快乐着”的真实感受) Topic 2: ... ...