(
课件网) 第2讲 打磨词汇升级句式,润色习作2法宝 策略一 词汇升级———学会运用高级词汇 策略二 句式升级———学会运用高级句式 目 录 索 引 策略一 词汇升级———学会运用高级词汇 技法1 求新求变 同样意义的词语,要根据语境使用最新学过的词汇而不是小学、初中学过的词汇。如果同样的意义重复出现,要使用不同的表达方式。 1.(2022全国乙卷)Those who choose to read English books and visit English learning websites only make up 18% and 12% respectively. →Those who choose to read English books and visit English learning websites only account for 18% and 12% respectively. 2.(2024新课标Ⅰ卷)It was such a good experience that I would always remember it. →It was such a memorable/an extraordinary experience that I would always keep it in mind. 3.(2023浙江1月卷)Throughout the event,I was attracted by the wide variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes,and those that provide food and shelter for animals. →Throughout the event,I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes, as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals. 技法2 求准求精 写作时不一定每一句都要有复杂句式,有时准确使用一个单词或短语就会让整个句子增色不少。 1.(2023新课标Ⅰ卷)I think that it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class. →I don’t think it a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class. 2.(2021全国乙卷)In conclusion,we should find a way to study online better. →In conclusion,we should find a way to study online more efficiently. 3.(2022全国甲卷)The World Oceans Day was set up to raise people’s awareness of protecting the oceans,which play an important part in global ecosystem. →The World Oceans Day was set up to raise people’s awareness of protecting the oceans,which play a significant/crucial part in global ecosystem. 技法3 短语优先 恰当地选用一些贴切、地道的高级表达,尤其是短语,对提高书面表达的得分至关重要。所以考生不妨考虑在文章中使用较高级的表达,充分展现自己的语言功底。 1.(2023新课标Ⅰ、Ⅱ卷)I would appreciate it if you could consider my suggestion. →I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestion into account/consideration. 2.(2023全国乙卷)Initially,on watching the Winter Olympic Games in Beijing,I began to love skating. →Initially,on watching the Winter Olympic Games in Beijing,I became enthusiastic about skating. 3.(2021全国乙卷)And eventually,we can master what we desire to learn. →And eventually,we can have a good command of what we desire to learn. 4.(2023新课标Ⅰ、Ⅱ卷)Firstly,randomly pairing up students may cause imbalanced language abilities within the groups. →Firstly,randomly pairing up students may lead to/result in imbalanced language abilities within the groups. 高分语料 普通表达与其对应升级表达总结: 类型1 校园生活 汉语意义 普通表达 升级表达 能够做某事 be able to do s ... ...
