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课件网) 第3讲 精雕细琢,学会打磨语言 一、丰富的句式 二、细化动作描写 目 录 索 引 三、丰富的情感描写 四、环境描写 五、动物描写 一、丰富的句式 1.主从复合句 ①(2024新课标Ⅰ、Ⅱ卷)Just then I realised that I had zero cash in my wallet.I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled out my Portuguese bankcard. 就在那时,我意识到我的钱包里没有现金。我一边掏出我的葡萄牙银行卡,一边向他露出了歉意的微笑。 ②(2024新课标Ⅰ、Ⅱ卷)He picked me up at the bus station where he had dropped me off four days before. 他在四天前送我下车的汽车站接我。 ③It dawned on me that a moment of kindness could mean so much to another,and that a simple act could make the world so much better. 我突然明白,片刻的善意对另一个人来说意义重大,一个简单的行为就可以让世界变得更美好。 [对点精练] 完成句子 ①这个故事吸引了她的注意力,她全神贯注,以至于几乎错过了午饭。 The story drew her attention and she was (结果状语从句). ②(2024新课标Ⅰ、Ⅱ卷)我还给了他一个我在布拉格(Prague)买的精美的纪念品,他高兴地接受了。 I also gave him an attractive souvenir (定语从句), (非限制性定语从句). so absorbed that she almost missed her lunch (that) I had bought at Prague which he accepted with delight ③她明白了,只有拥有创造力和观察力,才可以克服任何挑战。 She learned (宾语从句). (that) only with creativity and the power of observation could any challenge be overcome ④(2024九省联考)希尔达继续说,事实是,马娅一直在秘密地从水箱中收集物品,并把它们藏在水箱后面的过滤器附近。 The truth of the matter,Hilda continued,is (表语从句), hiding them near the filter in the back of the tank. that Maya has been secretly collecting items from the water tank ⑤虽然我想毫无保留地和他分享我的想法,但我没有这样做,唯恐我会阻止他。 (让步状语从句),I failed to do so for fear that I would hold him back. ⑥突然,我想到,我可以打开手机的手电筒作为信号。 Suddenly,it occurred to me (主语从句). ⑦几个月后,戈德伯格先生分享了这个令人兴奋的消息:很多人在看到这些海报后都来了,他们中的一些决定捐款或收养一条狗。 A couple of months later,Mr.Goldberg shared the exciting news (同位语从句) and some of them decided to donate money or adopt a dog. Though I wanted to share my ideas with him fully that I could turn on the flashlight of the cellphone as a signal that lots of people came after seeing the posters 2.非谓语动词 ①(2024新课标Ⅰ、Ⅱ卷)Giving him a firm handshake,I jumped out of the car,made a mad run for the bus,and jumped onto it just before its departure. 我和他紧紧地握了握手,随即跳下车,疯狂地向公共汽车跑去,在发车前跳上了车。 ②(2023新课标Ⅰ、Ⅱ卷)Encouraged by his words,I agreed to give it a try. 他的话让我深受鼓舞,我同意试一试。 ③To save Dora and her father from the critical condition,he quickly extended a helping hand. 为了把多拉和她的父亲从危急情 ... ...
