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课件网) 【话题解读】 物品介绍类写作应注意以下几点： 1. 抓准特征、说明到位：物品的特征可能有很多，介绍时要注意详略得当。如果有“闪光点”，即这一物品区别于其他物品的地方，应重点介绍。 2. 层次分明、条理清晰：应采用恰当的说明顺序和角度，可以从物品的外观、构造、功能等方面来分层依次描述，内容不宜相互交叉。 3. 选用合适的说明方法：物品介绍类写作可采用下定义、举例子、列数字、作比较等不同的说明方法。要根据所介绍物品的特征，选用恰当的说明方法。 【真题回放】 书包伴我学习，伴我成长，某英文报以“My Schoolbag”为题，举办中学生征文活动。请根据下列图表信息，写一篇短文。 内容包括：书包的外形特征、用途和书包背后的课业问题以及课余你期望做的事情。 提示： 1. 短文应包括图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯，段落分明； 2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名； 3. 词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My schoolbag What it looks like What is used for The problems your schoolbag may bring The things you expect to do in your free time 1. much schoolwork 2. ... 1. ... 2. ... My Schoolbag I have a schoolbag. _____ _____ (2016 江西) 【真题分析】 该书面表达要求介绍自己的书包，属于物品介绍。按照提示内容，具体可以分三段来写： 第一段描写书包的外形特征及用途。外形特征可以从颜色、尺寸、材质等方面介绍； 第二段说明自己遇到的课业问题。因为是课业问题且和书包有关，所以内容应围绕“学业负担重”展开； 最后一段表达自己的期望。 图表中的相应信息提到了“in your free time”，结合前段对课业问题的介绍进行分析判断，可知此段应围绕“减负”“享受生活”等内容展开。 标准范文 My Schoolbag I have a schoolbag. It is big and blue. It is used for carrying the school things, such as books, pens and so on. My schoolbag is of great help to me. However, it also brings me some problems. I have to do so much homework, so I put lots of things in it. Instead of enjoying the wonderful weekends, I am forced to have extra classes with it. My back hurts a lot because of my heavy schoolbag. As a middle school student, I hope to have more free time to develop my hobbies. I hope my schoolbag can share my joy and happiness rather than become a burden. 【高分突破】 My Schoolbag I have a schoolbag. It's blue, which is my favorite color. There are some yellow stars on the front that make the schoolbag cool and special. It can carry all my school things, like textbooks, notebooks and a pencil box. I like my schoolbag and I take good care of it. However, after using it for only half a year, I found some holes in it. Why I put too many things in it! Every day, I'm busy with my lessons, homework and tests and my schoolbag carries lots of things. I learn too much, and like my poor schoolbag, I can't stand that. Actually, my schoolbag and I are both “tired”. I hope I can have more time to read, to sing and to play with my friends. I hope I can have a lighter schoolbag and a happier school life. 【高分揭秘】 1. 作者用地道的语言完整地叙述了所有的内容要点，详略得当。在第一段对书包作介绍时，作者运用了一些表达情感色彩的话语，如my favorite color, make the schoolbag cool and special等 ... ...
