英语中考写作课件（33张PPT）

课件33张PPT。中考英语写作中考作文评分标准：满分档（20分）：文本长度符合要求、书写规范，涵盖所有要点、结构规范、条理清楚、逻辑严密，词汇丰富、 没有任何语法错误。 第五档(16-19分）：文本长度符合要求、书写规范，涵盖所有要点、结构规范、条理清楚、逻辑严密，词汇丰富、有少量语法错误。 第四档（12-15分）：文本长度符合要求、书写规范，涵盖所有要点、行文基本连贯，词汇不够丰富、有一些语法错误。 第三档（8-11分）：文本长度与要求有明显距离、书写不规范，要点不完整、行文不连贯，词汇不足、错误较多，勉强看出作文意图。 第二档（5-7分）：能用句子表达，错误百出，只能勉强猜测出作文意图。 第一档（0-3分）：有一些英语单词；白卷0分影响作文分数的因素： 1 题目要求、内容要点； 2 句子准确、通顺； 3 层次结构清晰； 4 拼写、语法等错误； 5 卷面整洁度；怎样才能写出一篇优秀作文，在中考中获取高分呢？ 写作要点 “一审”即审题。 “二写”即列纲。 “三连”即连句成文。 “四改”即修改润色全文。 审题：做到三审1.体裁 看清楚题目要求，读懂题目所表达的含义， 抓住要点，注意文体是什么 2.时态 3.人称书面表达 2016年学生体质健康调查结果显示青少年的生长发育情 况良好，但视力下降问题严重。假设你是Anna，你的笔 友Tony也面临视力下降的困惑，请你给他写一封信介绍 以下情况： 眼睛的重要性： 1.眼睛可以让你阅读 2. 眼睛可以让你看到身边的许多事物 3.…… 保护眼睛的措施：1.做眼保健操 2.保证充足的睡眠，养成健康的生活方式 3.不要长时间看书、看电视、玩电脑…… 书信Dear ..., I’m glad to receive your letter… -- -- -- Best wishes! Yours, Lucy a书信开头常用语 I am very glad to receive your letter (hear form you). Hello, Jane. Is everything going (on) well? … /How is everything going (on)? How time flies! It has been months/years since we last met. I’m writing to you for some advice on how to… I’m writing to ask if you can ... Thank you for inviting me to …. b 书信结尾常用语 Best wishes (to/for you). Wish you good luck. (I am) looking forward to hearing from you.写信，建议 总-分-总Dear Tony， Nice hearing from you. As we know, eyes are hearts’ windows. They make us could do some reading to open our eyes and see something around us. We can see flowers’ beautiful, water’s clean and sky’s blue by them. They make us see this colorful world. We can’t see anything without them. Therefore, they are so important for us. I heard you were weak at eyes past days. I can provide some ways to protect eyes for you. First of all, you should keep enough time to sleep and keep a healthy lifestyle. You shouldn’t read books, watch TV and surf the Internet for a long time. You’d better do eye exercises every day. It’s good for your eyes. If you feel tired of eyes, you could see somewhere far likes sky. Best wishes.Yours, AnnaDear Tony， Nice hearing from you. As we know, eyes are hearts’ windows. They make us could do some reading to open our eyes and see something around us. We can see flowers’ beautiful, water’s clean and sky’s blue by them. They make us see this colorful world. We can’t see anything without them. Therefore, they are so important for us. I heard you were weak at eyes past days. I can provide some ways to protect ... ...