Improve our writing如何提高写作 课件（29张）

课件29张PPT。Improve our writingIn your opinion, what is a good composition??Writing a composition is just like making a sandwich.a compositiona good starting topic sentence （主题句）a/an beautiful/attractive Body supporting sentences （扩展句）an excellent ending （结尾句 ） summarized sentences词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉 。使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。 Using advanced words1. 多实少虚 :nice 2. 短语优先：I cannot bear it. I want it. generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, easygoingI cannot put up with it. I am looking forward to it. ３.弃旧取新:There are potential(潜在的) safety dangers.There exist potential safety dangers.1.We all think he is a great man.We all _____ him .The plan _____ to be a failure.Our school _____ twenty–six classrooms.speak /think highly ofturned outis made up of / consists of2. As a result the plan was a failure.3. In our school, there are twenty-six classrooms.Practice 14. You can find my house easily.You’ll _____finding my house. A good idea _____ me.have no difficulty in I suddenly _____a good idea..occurred to / struckcame up with5. Suddenly I thought out a good idea.6.Because the weather was good, our journey was pleasant. _____the good weather, our journey was pleasant.Thanks to 运用多种语法结构，句式灵活多变，可以使文章文采飞扬。 He didn’t turn up. It disappointed us. 1) 名词性从句 (Noun clauses) _____made us disappointed. 2) 原因状语从句 (Adverbial clauses) We were disappointed_____. 3) 定语从句 (Attributive clause) He didn’t turn up,_____. 4) 感叹句 (Exclamation) How _____ when we found he didn’t turn up ! 5) 并列句 (Compound sentences) disappointed (we were) That he didn’t turn upbecause he didn’t turn upwhich made us disappointed/ disappointed us.He didn’t turn up and it disappointed us. _____.Group competition He didn’t realize his rudeness until he returned home.(倒装) Not until he returned home did he realize his rudeness.（倒装）We can achieve a satisfying grade by changing the way we study. (only＋状语，倒装) Only by changing the way we study can we achieve a satisfying grade. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things. （使用名词性从句） What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things. It is surprising that the little girl knows so many things.I passed the physics exam because of your help. (用虚拟语气） But for / Without your help, I couldn’t/wouldn't have passed the physics exam She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (使用过去分词) Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab._____ , we will go outing tomorrow.Weather permittingIf weather permits, we will go outing tomorrow.(独立主格)Using proper linking words Group competition 一篇好的书面表达，还应该行文连贯流畅， 具有“逻辑美”。恰当的连接词，能使上下 文衔接自然、紧凑，使文章更为地道，更 具“英语味”。 请在下列句子中填上恰 ... ...