人教版高考英语复习书面表达之围绕要点扩充细节课件 （共34张PPT）

课件33张PPT。围绕要点，补充细节书面表达书面表达审抓组扩连抄上节作文回顾假如今年暑假你在乡下度过了一个有意义的假期，请根据以下要点下一篇短文，介绍你的暑假生活。 1. 帮助祖父母干农活； 2. 有时去村西的小河游泳； 3. 帮助邻里的孩子补习英语。 词数100左右；可适当补充细节以使行文连贯。学生习作This summer holiday, I spent a meaningful holiday in my grandparents’. First of all, I helped my grandparents to do farm work. Sometimes, I went swimming in the river west of the village. I also spent some time helping neighbors’ children learn English. So I have a meaningful summer holiday.学生习作I had an unforgettable holiday this summer. First, I helped my grandparents with work in the field. It left a deep impression on me. At the same time, I realized that the farmers are hard. Sometimes, we went swimming in the river to the west of the village, and we caught a lot of fish. Suddenly, the dark clouds gathered and it rained heavily. We hurriedly ran up to our house. Although we were wet through, we still enjoyed ourselves. Then, I also helped neighbors’ children with English . I believe this is the best holiday of mine.学生习作This summer holiday, I spent a meaningful holiday in my grandparents’. First of all, I helped my grandparents to do farm work. Sometimes, I went swimming in the river west of the village. I also spent some time helping neighbors’ children learn English. So I have a meaningful summer holiday. 要点齐全，语言正确，51字学生习作I had an unforgettable holiday this summer. First, I helped my grandparents with work in the field. It left a deep impression on me. At the same time, I realized that the farmers are hard. Sometimes, we went swimming in the river to the west of the village, and we caught a lot of fish. Suddenly, the dark clouds gathered and it rained heavily. We hurriedly ran up to our house. Although we were wet through, we still enjoyed ourselves. Then, I also helped neighbors’ children with English . I believe this is the best holiday of mine. 要点齐全，语言基本正确，102字，但偏离要点书面表达六步法： 1 认真审题，看好提示 2 抓内容要点 3 组词成句子 4 适当扩充细节： 增加地点 增加时间 发散思维 5 连接成文 6 抄写4 适当增加细节： 增加时间 e.g. 外出购物 I’m going out shopping . I’m going out shopping, and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm. 增加地点 e.g.替房东还书 I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. 发散思维? 如何围绕要点发散思维呢？I like sports very much, 方法一 列举具体的实例来补充说明e.g.1: 我喜欢体育运动such as basketball and football. e.g.2: 青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth. For example, we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags, refuse to use single-use products, plant more trees and save water and energy.After supper, the man went to his bedroom.After a rich meal, the fat man slowly made his way to his bedroom.e.g.1：晚饭后，这个男的走向 ... ...