中考英语冲刺专题复习课件：书面表达写作指导（作文注意事项）

中考英语专题复习 书面表达写作指导 写作，找要点 tall/short thin/heavy Yao Ming is taller than Zeng Zhiwei. Zeng Zhiwei is shorter than Yao Ming. Liu Yifei is thinner than Han Hong. Han Hong is heavier than Liu Yifei. Xie Na is funnier than Wang Ning. Wang Ning is more serious than Xie Na. as …as Lucy is as beautiful as Lily. 用心比较 funny/serious much much Make sentences using the words given. Watch and think. 观察与思考 much /a lot/a little/even 修饰形容词或副词的_____ 比较级 ※ 写作方法指导 一、审题，找要点。 简要介绍一位家人或朋友这几年来的变化，包括外形、性格、喜好、生活方式等几个方面的变化。必须要写到上述这四点！ 二、怎样写？ 开头总写: People sure change! My best friend, Mary has changed a lot in the last few years. 第一点: She used to be_____, but now _____ .第二点: She used to be _____, but now _____ __第三点: She used to like _____, but now she likes _____ 第四点: She used to get up at 7:00, but now she gets up at 6:00. She used to _____, but now she _____（在日常生活方面拓展。） 结尾：As Time goes by, it’s amazing how she’s changed and she is never a child. People sure change! My best friend, Mary has changed a lot in the last few years. She used to be fat but now she is thin. She used to have short hair but now she grows it long. She used to be really quiet but now she is outgoing. She used to spend a lot of time playing computer games, but now she has to study all day. She used to do morning exercises and some other activities every day, but now she is used to studying all the time and spend little time on her hobbies. In the evening, she used to watch TV?with her family, but now she must?go to bed early, because she has to?get?up early in the morning to read the text books. Time goes by, it’s amazing how she’s changed and she is never a child. ※ 写作方法指导 一、审题，找要点。 1．生活在社区里的孩子不认识周围的邻居，没有兄弟姐妹（没朋友）①。 2．提出自己的建议：吸引孩子们参加上文提到的社区青年俱乐部并参加其组织的活动②； 给孩子们提供一个娱乐交流的地方③； 组织社区里的孩子参加清洁本小区的公益劳动④。 必须要写到上述这四点！ 二、怎样写？ 第一点: 开头：Thank you for reading my E-mail! _____(过渡句子：Luckily, you want to help us. Here are my suggestions.) 第二点: First, I think we can__, We can___, such as ___ 第三点: Second, I think we can _____, and then_____ 第四点: Third, I think we can_____. 结尾：Our life will be fun and colorful Dear Uncle Huang, Thank you for reading my e-mail! I am living in this community. I don’t have any sister or brothers. I also have no friends here. Luckily, you want to help us. Here are my suggestions. First, we can organize the children in this community to clean up our neighborhood. Through this activity, we can know each other and make new friends. Second, I hope we can be offered a room to do homework, and then we can help and learn from each other. Third, I think we can ask children to join our Youth Club. We can take part in a lot of interesting activities, such as holiday camps and discos, reg ... ...