高考英语作文高分策略：名校真实学生考试中高分作文整理（十四）

中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台 高考英语作文高分策略： 名校真实学生考试中高分作文整理（十四） 作文题目： 你是李华，汶川高三的学生，你的笔友刘欢曾在汶川大地震中在你们学校做过自愿者，一直心系汶川，向你打听汶川震后你们学校这些年的变化。请根据以下图片提示，以“Great Changes”为主要内容，回复他。 词数：100左右 1. 学校灾后的变化，如教学与活动场所，以及师生精神面貌等；2. 发生变化的原因；3. 你的感想。 优秀段1：Thanks to the volunteers like you who got involved in the reconstruction, our school is back on the right track now. Certainly, we also credit the government with taking immediate action. Besides, but for the help from our society, we would not hear the laughter in our school again. 优秀段2 When it comes to the reasons why such changes have happened, it is the guidance and leadership of Communist Party, the support of the government, the kindness and care of the entire society, and the perseverance of our people that make our reconstruction a reality. Besides, we wouldn’t have made it without your help, so your participation in the voluntary work has always been highly appreciated. 优秀段3......Thanks to you as well as other warm-hearted volunteers, we were raised up again from the depths of despair and darkness while our homes were rebuilt with the help of our government. 优秀学生作文1： Hearing that you want to know the great changes over the ten years in Wenchuan after the earthquake in 2008. I am writing to tell you something that you expect. There have been great changes that have taken place in the school over the past ten years. On May 12,2008, a severe earthquake destroyed almost everything in the school, leaving badly-damaged buildings. It is now, however, taking on a new look. Tall buildings have been put up, including classroom and laboratory buildings, There is also newly-built standard playground. In the new environment, teachers and students are living happily and working hard. It is really amazing that the once-ruined place has now been turned into a beautiful school, full of life Obviously, without the help of the whole society, there would be no new school today. It is love and concern that have brought about the great changes. Many hands make light work. We can work wonders if we unite as a family, caring for each other and helping those in need. Union is strength. That year you offered so much help to our school. I sincerely invite you to come here again and experienced the great changes with us . 优秀学生作文2： Knowing that you were a volunteer helping our school after Wenchuan earthquake and are concerned about our reconstruction, I am more than willing to tell you that great changes have taken place. New teaching buildings have been built in our school where only ruins could be seen after the terrible disaster. What’s worth mentioning is that not only are there brand new classrooms with advanced equipment, but also a playground with athletic facilities. It’s pleasant to see students and teachers playing basketball actively a ... ...