(
课件网) 话题写作（十） 健康生活 第一篇 教材考点梳理 【话题点睛】 针对的话题主要是体育锻炼和健康饮食。 体育锻炼主要涉及:开展体育锻炼的方式;鼓励多进行体育运动,强身健体等。 健康饮食主要涉及:远离垃圾食品,健康饮食的好处及具体做法等。 ———民以食为天”,饮食的安全和健康受到越来越多的关注和重视。请你以“Say No to Junk Food”为题,根据以下要点写一篇英语短文。 [写作要点] (1)垃圾食品尽管美味,但对健康无益,而且其过多的包装会产生更多的垃圾; (2)远离垃圾食品,还应选择正确的生活方式,如:①三餐要有规律,少吃零食、快餐;②多吃蔬菜、水果等健康食物,以提供身体必需营养;③多参加户外活动…… [写作要求] (1)词数:80左右,开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数; (2)内容必须包括上述所有要点,可适当发挥。 典例分析 [参考词汇] 过多包装over packaging; 有规律地regularly;营养nutrition Say No to Junk Food Nowadays, more and more attention has been paid to food safety and health. As far as I am concerned, we should say no to junk food. ?? ? ? ? In a word, a healthy diet with less junk food can help make us stronger and stronger. 【思路点拨】 1.要点提炼:主题是号召大家健康饮食,少吃垃圾食品。写作内容可以从以下几方面展开: (1)垃圾食品虽美味,但既不健康,又不环保; (2)倡导健康的生活方式,如按时吃三餐,多吃水果、蔬菜,多做户外运动等; (3)总结概括健康的生活方式给我们带来的好处。 2.确定时态:一般现在时 3.确定人称:第一人称/第二人称 【写作架构】 【基础写作】 Ⅰ.写主干句(根据所给提示补全下列各句。) 1.为了保持健康的生活方式,我们应该远离垃圾食品。 (stay away from) To keep a healthy lifestyle, we should .? 2.垃圾食品的确对我们的身体有害。 (do harm to) Junk food surely our body.? 3.健康的饮食能有助于使我们越来越强壮。 (比较级+and+比较级) A healthy diet can help make us .? 4.从此次经历中我意识到我必须停止吃垃圾食品。(stop doing sth.) From the experience I know I junk food.? stay away from junk food does harm to stronger and stronger must stop eating Ⅱ.句子升格(按括号中的要求改写句子。) 1.Have more fruit and vegetables.They can provide the nutrition we need. (改为定语从句) _____ _____ 2.There is no doubt. Junk food surely does harm to our body. (合并为一句) _____ Have more fruit and vegetables which can provide the nutrition we need. There is no doubt that junk food surely does harm to our body. 【连句成文】 Say No to Junk Food Nowadays, more and more attention has been paid to food safety and health. As far as I am concerned, we should say no to junk food. There is no doubt that junk food is made delicious and attractive, but it surely does harm to our body. Meanwhile, the over packaging leads to much more rubbish. To get away from junk food, we should focus on how to keep a healthy lifestyle. There are many tips to follow. First, eat regularly—three meals a day on time. Try as few snacks and little fast food as possible. Second, have more fruit and vegetables which can provide the nutrition we need. What’s more, do more outdoor activities. As long as you are busy with something intere ... ...
