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课件网) English Writing What makes a good composition? What makes a good composition? Good and clear handwriting Clear and accurate content Precise structure Varied sentence pattern Advanced vocabulary Writing 假定你是李华，计划暑假期间去英国学习英语，为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意，请给该校写封信，询问有关情况（箭头所指内容）。 注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3．参考词汇：住宿 accommodation。 Part 3.语气错误(礼貌问题) Part 1.书信格式错误 Part 2.审题信息有误 Step1.学生写作常见错误 Part 4.句子结构错误 Part 5.卷面问题 称呼格式错误及无落款 Part 1.书信格式错误 称呼错误且使用中式英语 正确书信格式 DearTom, _____ Yours, LiHua Dear Editor, _____ Yours truly, LiHua Dear Sir\Madam, _____ Yours truly, LiHua 题目中给出具体写信对象的名字或职位称呼的 题目中要求给报社、杂志等刊物写信的 题目中未给出具体写信对象的 Part 2.审题信息有误 与题干要求不符 文章中出现不相关信息 Part 3.语气错误（礼貌问题） Some useful expressions(礼貌问题) Would you mind doing sth. It’s kind of you to do sth. I’d appreciate it if you could do sth. I’d be grateful if you could do sth. Read aloud Part 4.句子结构错误 中式英语 句子缺谓语 语序不当 固定搭配 错误 Corrective sentences 1.How many hours do we have to relax on the weekend? 2. How many students are there in a class? 3. I want to know what the class size is. 4.I hope to have a comfortable accommodation. 字迹潦草、涂改过多 Part 5.卷面问题 10 Appreciation 1 2 3 4 5 How to better your sentences? Let's have a try: 4.1) 一般表达：I am Li Hua. I am a Chinese student. I want to know some information. It is in your ad. 亮点表达: 4.2）一般表达：I plan to go to Britain and study English for 6 weeks during the summer holiday. 亮点表达： I am Li Hua, a China student and I want to know some information in your ad. I'm planning to spend 6 weeks studying English in the UK during the summer holiday. 同位语 固定词组 How to better your sentences? Let's have a try: 4.3). 一般表达：After reading your ad, I want to know more information. 亮点表达： 4.4）一般表达：What time does the date start? 亮点表达： Noticing your advertisement, I'm looking forward to knowing more details. I would appreciate it if you could tell me what time the date starts. 分词做状语 固定短语 固定句式+ 委婉语气 How to better your sentences? Let's have a try: 4.5). 一般表达：How many courses are there every day? How do you arrange the courses? 亮点表达： 4.6）一般表达：I hope the fee will be cheap. 亮点表达： Could you please tell me how many courses there are every day and how you arrange the courses? I hold the belief that the reasonable fee is acceptable. I hope the fee will be cheap, which is important to me. 委婉语气 + 宾语从句 新的词语 + 同位语从句 非限制性定语从句+增加细节 How to better your sentences? Let's have a try: 4.7). 一般表达：Please tell me the information as soon as possible. 亮点表达： If it is possible, could you please tell me the information as soon as possible? I would be g ... ...
