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课件网) 初中英语人教版九年级 Unit13 We are trying to save the earth. 写作话题：The world and the environment (世界与环境) What are the problems? What caused the environmental problems Problem pollution waste of energy break the balance of ecosystem waste water waste gas witter plastic bags …. forget to turn the light or shower …. cut down too many trees kill the animals …. the environment around us is becoming worse and worse… we can’t see…,the air is so… How to save the earth should/ can … had better …. It’s quite necessary / important to …. Save the energy Cut down the pollution other ways throw litter in the bin take the reusable bags… ride bikes or walk instead of… turn off the light /shower while… put old things to good use recycle the used books or paper… … keep the balance of ecosystem. plant more trees . develop laws to … close down the factories that… the little things in daily lives government and public Save our earth Beginning Body Ending I believe if everyone can make their effort, our world will be much better. should /need /had better do…. It’s necessary for us to do…. We mustn’t/ shouldn’t/ aren’t supposed to do … It is everyone’s duty to …; The government should…； …. Cut down the pollution Save the energy other ways As we all know, today there is more and more pollution and the environment is becoming worse and worse… facts give advice Call on and ,not only …but also…, but , because , so,…first ,second… use different sentence patterns no spelling and grammar mistakes The earth is our only home.It’s our duty to protect it. Let's take actions as soon as possible! Let's protect the earth, and live a better environment. correct logical colorful beautiful beautiful sentences beautiful handwriting 请和同伴交换习作，依据以上提示和下列评价表，相互欣赏与修改习作，然后给对方的习作打分。 修改习作时可使用这些符号： 优美句子 ～； 漏词 ∧； 错处 ○； 删除 ／； 语法错误 G； 人称错误 P； 时态错误 T； 拼写错误 S。 Show Time Which is the best ? beautiful hand-writing Enough words Clear opinions beautiful sentences spelling or grammar mistakes linking words ? ? ? ? ? 评 分 表 项目 标准 自我评价 同伴评价 教师评价 结构 （3分） 段落合理 （2 分） 衔接自然 (1分) 内容 （8分） 要点1:当今的环境问题（2分） 要点2:你的建议（3分） 要点3:呼吁（1分） 拓展合理 (2分) 语言 （3分） 词汇丰富 (1分) 句法正确 ，语言优美( 2分) 卷面 （1分） 书写工整（ 1分） It's everyone's duty to love and protect the environment
