中考英语二轮复习-书面表达“从无到有”-书面表达（错误分析2）（微课视频+课件11张PPT）

课件11张PPT。七年级提优课程-书面表达 常见错误分析 二 May1汉式英语信息提示 ??????? 你家里养了一只猫,她很小,也很可爱。由于她的存在,你们全家人都很快乐。昨天晚上你去商店给她买食物,在回家的路上下起了大雨。当你到家时,你浑身都湿透了。虽然淋了雨,但是你很高兴。不管怎么说,小猫不用挨饿了。1习作? My home (1) raises a lovely small cat. My family are always happy because of her. I went to the store to buy some food for her yesterday night (2). Unluckily, there was a big rain (3) on my way home. When I got home, I was all wet (4). Although I was wet, but (5) I was very happy. No matter how to say (6), the cat would not be hungry. (1) “home”的汉语意思虽然也是“家”,但它指“家”时一般只指地点而不指人。根据英语习惯该句应改为My family has a lovely small cat或We keep a lovely small cat at home。 (3) 根据英语表达习惯,“一场大雨”应表达为a heavy rain,而不 是a big rain。(2) “昨天晚上”要么表达为yesterday evening,要么表达为last night。但根据语境,这里用前者较合适。(4) be all wet的意思是“完全错了”。要表达“全身湿透了”,可以用wet through或completely wet。(5) 由于受汉语“虽然……但是”结构的影响而出错。在英语中,although和but在一个句子中不能连用。(6) 这里要表达“不管怎么说”,可以用anyway或anyhow,文中的表达显然属于汉式英语。 1★精品范文 ?We keep a lovely small cat at home. My family are always happy because of her. I went to the store to buy some food for her yesterday evening. Unluckily, there was a heavy rain on my way home. When I got home, I was wet through. Although I was wet, I was very happy. Anyway, the cat would not be hungry. 2习惯用法和固定搭配信息提示 ?2005年10月1日? 星期六? 睛 　　昨天你叔叔打电话来,请你找几个朋友去他农场收桔子。于是今天早上6点,你和朋友就坐汽车出发了。一到农场便开始干活。桔子树上结满了桔子,你们又摘桔子又装车,忙完后在那儿吃了午餐,还吃了不少桔子。下午坐卡车回家。你们虽然忙了一天,却感到非常快乐。 请根据以上提示写一篇80词左右的英语日记。请注意日记的格式。 习作2October 1, 2005, Saturday?????????????????????????????????? Sunny ?????? My uncle called me yesterday. He said in the phone (1) that he had an orange harvest. He needed some help. He asked me to go there with my friends. ?????? Today morning (2) we left home at 6:00. We went there by a bus (3). The trees in (4) the farm were really full with (5) oranges. When we got there, we began to work at once. We picked a lot of oranges and put them in the boxes. Some strong boys carried the boxes into a truck. After work, we had the lunch (6) at my uncle’s house. We had many oranges, too. In the afternoon, we came back home by truck. We were busy today, but we were happy. (1) “在电话里说……”应用介词on。(2) “今天上午”的英语说法是this morning。(3) by+交通工具名词时,其间不用冠词或其他修饰词(4) “在农场里”介词用on,应是on the farm。(5) “……充(结)满……”有两种表示方法,be full of ... 或be filled with...。(6) 英语中在表示吃一日三餐时,三餐前不加冠词。2★精品范文October 1, 2005, Saturday??????????????????????????????????? Sunny ?????? My uncle called me yesterday. He said on the phone that he had an ... ...