(
课件网) Unit 5 First aid 如何写指导性说明文 你校英文报?“First Aid”?栏目现面向全校学生公开征集稿件，你有意参加。请你根据图片内容，用英语写一篇短文，介绍如何给溺水者实施急救。 注意：1.?词数100左右；2.?可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 一、审题定调 本写作任务要求写一篇短文介绍如何给溺水者实施急救，属于指导性说明文。此类写作的特点是：目的明确、简洁明了、步骤清晰、操作性强。句型以祈使句为主，时态以一般现在时为主，人称多用第一人称或第二人称。 二、谋篇布局 本文可分三部分： 第一部分：引入话题（遇到有人溺水怎么办）； 第二部分：按照图片先后顺序说明如何给溺水者施救； 第三部分：总结全文（说明给溺水者实施急救的重要性）。 三、组织语言 1.?第一部分：引入话题。 普通表达 高级表达 Do you know what to do when you find ...? Here are some rules you can follow. ◆Whenever you find ..., it’s extremely important / vital to give first aid. Here are effective ways to save ... ◆If you find ..., knowing some first aid knowledge can make a big difference. The steps are as follows. 2.?第二部分：说明施救步骤。 普通表达 高级表达 ◆First, get the drowning person out of the water quickly. ◆Second, if the person is not breathing, place him or her on his or her back and use the mouth-to-mouth method to start his or her breathing. ◆Third, keep pressing the person’s chest hard until the ambulance comes. ◆First of all, get the drowning person out of the water as quickly as possible. ◆Then, check if the person can breathe. If not, you’d better try to start his or her breathing????? immediately, using the mouth-to-mouth method. ◆Continue performing first aid and don’t stop until the ambulance arrives. 3.?第三部分：总结全文。 普通表达 高级表达 ◆If you know what you can and should do when ..., you can save lives. ◆Giving first aid is very useful when ... ◆Seconds count in a situation where ..., and knowing what to do can mean the difference between life and death. ◆Obviously, a knowledge of first aid will be of great help in our daily life. 【常用表达】 First, second, third, at last ... First, next, then, finally ... Firstly / First of all / To begin with, ... Secondly, .... Besides / In addition, ... Last but not least ... 结尾常用表达： We can draw the conclusion that ... In short / In brief / In a word, ... It seems clear that ... We can know / learn that ... ? If you find someone drowning, knowing some first aid knowledge can make a big difference. The steps are as follows. ?????? First of all, get the drowning person out of the water as quickly as possible. Then, check if the person can breathe. If not, you’d better try to start his or her breathing immediately, using the mouth-to-mouth method. 【参考范文】 Meanwhile, do remember to call for help. Continue performing first aid and don’t stop until the ambulance arrives. ?????? Seconds count in a situation where you find someone drowning, and knowing what to do can mean the difference between life and death. 你校英语网站将开辟“急救知识介绍”专栏。请你根据所给提 ... ...
