上教版高一必修二Unit 1 No limits第六课时学案(教师版+学生版)

中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台 高中英语 上教版 高一年级 第一学期 必修二 第一单元 第六课时 学案（教师版） 课题：Writing：An article to describe a person you admire 课时学习目标： 分析范文的内容、语言和标点符号的用法； 写一篇自己最敬仰的人的征文，注意细节描写和语言的准确性。 I. Pre-writing Interactive Task 1: Read the competition announcement What is the topic of the writing competition? Inspirational people. What can be included in the description? A person you admire, the reason why he/she is special, what he/she has achieved and his/her photo. II. While-writing Interactive Task 1: Analyze the sample entry What is each paragraph is mainly about? The 1st paragraph is the introduction. We know who-Grandpa Lu; what-He shows that old people can achieve amazing things, just like young people. He swam in the river 320 times last year. The 2nd paragraph is the body part, which gives us more details. It explains why Grandpa Lu started swimming; when he started swimming and what he has done. The last paragraph shows why he is special. Interactive Task 2: Discuss the guiding questions Aspects of writing Guiding questions My exploration Content Who is Grandpa Lu? What is special about him? Grandpa Lu is the oldest person who regularly swims in winter in the writer's city. What is his achievement? He swam in a local river 320 times last year. Why does the writer admire him? kind, persistent, courageous, helpful keep swimming in winter achieve amazing things: swim 320 times in a year make a lot of friends make money for charity Language What words or phrases show Grandpa Lu's achievements? adjectives: amazing, incredible numbers: 320 times, 82 years old What words or phrases show the writer's admiration for Grandpa Lu? commentary adjectives: amazing, incredible，special phrases: focus on, never consider giving it up, make lots of swimming friends, make money for charity by swimming Which connecting expressions does the writer use to link the sentences? and, after, also Editing How is direct speech presented in this text, and what punctuation is used? Quotation marks are used for direct speech and the punctuation is usually inside the quotation marks, e.g. “ I started to swim out of curiosity, and then I found that I just couldn’t stop.” When direct speech is part of a larger sentence, we separate it with a comma, e.g. “ If the weather is not too bad, I will go swimming,” said Grandpa Lu. We can state the speaker by adding “said sb” after the closing quotation mark. Why does the writer use capital letters for “Grandpa Lu”? a proper noun Interactive Task 3: Brainstorm Think of who you are going to write about and give reasons. Answers may vary. Interactive Task 4: Write a description of a person you admire. Answers may vary. III. Post-writing Analyze a student’ s sample essay Wu Jianxiong, a great physicist, is the person I admire. She was called the Chinese Madame Curie and achieved a lot in the area of physics. She devoted all her life to physics. Ms. ... ...