江苏省百校联考高三年级第二次试卷 66. 假定你是李华，你校正在举办英语作文竞赛。请你以“Music and Me”为题，写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1. 音乐对你的重要性； 2. 你喜欢的音乐类型及原因。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Music and Me _____【答案】 Music and Me I like sharing the saying with others that music is to me what air is to life. I always think music is the most beautiful language in the world. It is an important part of my life, which offers me energy and power when I am busy studying or get stuck in difficulties. Among so much music, I like pop music most. I can listen to it anywhere in the world. It makes me happy when I feel upset and helps me face my challenges with a peaceful mind. Most importantly, I feel confident when singing a pop song. 【解析】 【分析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以“Music and Me”为题，写一篇短文投稿。 详解】第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。 结构：总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求： 1. 音乐对你的重要性； 2. 你喜欢的音乐类型及原因。 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） share sth. with sb.; part of; offer sb. sth.; be busy doing; be stuck in; help sb. do sth. 第三步：连词成句 1. I like sharing the saying with others that music is to me what air is to life. 2. It is an important part of my life, which offers me energy and power when I am busy studying or get stuck in difficulties. 3. It makes me happy when I feel upset and helps me face my challenges with a peaceful mind. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考） 1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last 2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including, 3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although +clause(从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… 4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。 【点睛】[高分句型1]：I like sharing the saying with others that music is to me what air is to life.这句话运用了名词性从句。 [高分句型2]：It is an important part of my life, which offers me energy and power when I am busy studying or get stuck in difficulties.这句话运用了关系代词which引导的非限定性定语从句。 [高分句型3]：Most importantly, I feel confident when singing a pop song.这句话运用了现在分词作状语。 浙江省2020~2021学年高三百校12月联考 46. 假定你是李华,得知你的英国好友James对中国的美食非常感兴趣。请根据以下要点,用英语给他写一封邮件。 内容包括: 1.介绍中国美食的特点； 2.推荐一种中国美食； 3.建议品尝。 注意: 1.词数80左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 _____【答案】One possible version: Dear James, Delighted to know you're interested in Chinese food，I’m writing to share more information with you. Chinese food is ... ...
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