人教版新目标2021中考英语一轮话题写作（一）日常生活（写作思路+范文+模拟练习）

中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台 话题写作（一）日常活动 教材话题链接 七下Unit2 What time do you go to school ? 七下Unit 6 I’m watching TV. 七下Unit 12 What did you do last weekend ? 八上Unit 2 How often do you exercise ? 典/例/分/析 假设你是李华，请给你的好朋友Mike 写一封电子邮件，向他简要介绍你一天的主要活动。 要点如下： 1.生活方式：很健康，早上6:00起床，早餐前锻炼半个小时。 2 交通：你家离学校很近，通常步行上学，大概花十分钟到达学校。 3 爱好：喜欢阅读和写作，每天会阅读和写作1个小时。因为擅长写作，所以梦想着成为一名作家。 注意： 1 词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。 2 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3 文中得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。 Dear Mike , How is it going ? _____ Looking forward to your reply . Yours Li Hua 满分作文五步法 Step 1 审-审清题意 文体：_____ 人称:_____ 时态：_____ 功能:_____ 要点： 1._____ 2._____ 3. _____ 4. _____ Step 2 搭-列提纲，搭好框架 My daily Life 开篇点题：Topic : my everyday life Lifestyle: have a healthy living style 主体内容：get up at six ; do exercise before breakfast ; walk to school /go to school on foot ; like reading and writing ; dream of becoming a great writer 总结收尾：Looking forward to your reply . Step 3 : 连-连词成句 开篇点题： Let me tell you _____ . I have _____ . 主体内容： I get up _____every morning I usually _____in the park . My home is not far from our school . I often _____. I like _____ . I dream _____. 总结收尾 Looking forward to your reply . Step 4. 组-组句成篇 Dear Mike , How is it going ? Let me tell you my daily life . I have a healthy living style . I get up at six every morning . Before having breakfast , I usually do exercise for half an hour in the park . My home is not far from our school . So I often walk to school . It takes me about ten minutes to get to school. I like reading and writing . I spend one hour enjoying them . I dream of becoming a great writer . I’m sure my everyday life is happy and interesting . Looking forward to your reply . Yours Li Hua Step 5 修-修饰美化 扩句： Let me tell you _____my everyday life 扩句： So I often walk to school . _____ makes me relaxed . 扩句：_____ , I like reading and writing . I spend one hour enjoying them every day . My dream is _____a great writer someday . 【名师点晴】 文章的连贯性是评分的一条标准，因此同学们应根据故事情节，事情发生的先后次序（时间或空间），使用一些表示并列，递进等关系的过渡词，对写好的句子进行加工整理，使文章连贯、自然、流畅。 同时避免汉化现象，尽量使用熟悉的句型。 其次，正确使用固定搭配以及两三个好的句型，如：被动句、非谓语动词、复合句或it作形式主语的句子等。 最后，应该围绕动词中心进行恰当地联想和发挥。 美文诵读 Dear Mike , How is it going ? Let me tell you something about my everyday life . I have a healthy living style . I get up at six every morning . Before having breakfast , I usually do exercise for half an hour in the park . My home is not far from our school . So I often walk to school . Going to school on foot / Walking to school makes me relaxed . It only takes me about ten minutes to ... ...