09 新高考英语读后续写：八大对话模型（38张PPT）

八大对话模式 新高考读后续写 Part 1 八大对话模式 Part 2 五大对话误区 Part 3 对话模式赏析 Part 1 八大对话模式 1）对话描写必须为推动故事情节服务，是情节发展的一个环节，每段出现一句即可； 2）对话描写必须反映人物的心理与情感，刻画人物的性格； 3）对话描写不宜过长，侧重口语化词汇，避开生僻词汇； 4）对话描写要尽可能结合动作描写，明确对谁说，具有画面感； 5）对话描写中要学会使用几个感叹词，表示说话人的喜、怒、哀、乐等情绪； 句型1：“...,” he said,?（sth) doing/done?...? say后接doing或者是done作伴随状语，或是独立主格作状语，增加了动作描写。引号内除了用问号与感叹号，只用逗号，不用句号。 1) “I didn't know what I was doing,” she said,?_____(laugh). “我不知道我在做什么,” 她笑着说。 2) “I'll get us some coffee,” she said,?_____(head)for the kitchen. “我去给我们拿点咖啡” 她说着朝厨房走去。 laughing heading 3) “That's nice,” Alex said quietly,?_____(focus)?on his plate. “太好了,” 亚历克斯平静地说，专注于他的盘子。 4) “Very clever,” said the teacher,?_____(nod)?his head as if pleased. “很聪明,” 老师高兴地点了点头说。 5) “Uncle, forgive me, I did that... unintentionally,” he said,?_____(point)?to the broken glass. “叔叔，原谅我，是我无意中打碎的…,” 他指着碎玻璃说。 6) “Why did they have to kill the dog?” she said, her eyes _____(mist) with tears. “为什么他们一定要杀了这只狗?” 她含着眼泪说道。 focusing nodding pointing misting 句型2：“...,” he said,?as/when/before/as if...? say后接状语从句，增加了动作等细节描写。例如： 1) “Watch out!” she shouted,?_____the car started to move. “当心!” 当汽车开始移动时，她喊道。 2) “What a beauty!” said the nurse?_____she came to the door. “多美啊!” 护士走到门口时说道。 as as 3) “Dear me! I wish I hadn't cried so much before,” said Alice _____she swam about the lake, trying to find her way out. 当爱丽丝在湖里到处游，设法找到出路时，她说道, “天哪！但愿我以前没有哭得那么凶就好了。” 4) “Come on, Clancy. To the boat,” George said _____he ran ahead of me. “克兰西，快来，上船去。” 乔治在我的前面边跑边说。 as as 句型3： “...,” he said,?and?(then he) did.... say后接并列谓语或接并列句，增加了动作描写。例如： 1) “Good morning, children!” said the minister, _____he kindly shook hands with both. “孩子们，早上好!” 牧师说，他和蔼地和两人握手。 2) “Yes, I think so,” he said reluctantly,?_____left the study. “是的，我想是的,” 他不情愿地说，然后离开了书房。 and and 3) “Come here,” said the little man,?_____took her to one of the corners of the building. “过来,” 小个子男人说，然后把她带到楼的一个角落。 4) “Drive safely,” he said, _____ waved goodbye. “小心开车,” 他说着挥手告别。 and and 句型4：“...,” he said,?“....” say后接另一句对话，句首字母要大写，后一句对话前用句号；如后面内容与前内容是完整一个话，则首字母小写，后一句对话前用逗号。例如： 1) “There was a letter from Prince Andrew today,” he said to Princess Mary. “Haven't you read it?” “今天有一封来自安德鲁王子的信,” 他对玛丽公主说, “你没读过吗?” 2) “Well, well!” said the man,?“are there really people in this room?” “好吧 ... ...