01 新高考英语读后续写：“万能情景”突破法（28张PPT）

“万能情景”突破法 新高考读后续写 Part 1 量化六大高分因素 Part 2 续写步骤与情节构建 Part 3 “万能情景”续写万能模式 读后续写六大高分因素 衔接好 贴合度 语言好 0涂改 短语多 0错误 Part1 续写步骤与情节构建 一、读后续写：新高考题型 读写结合 读：理解原文 写：语言能力 确保续写与原文上下连贯与衔接 丰富的内容、语法与词汇 二、读后续写两个基本思路 一）内容创造： 二）语言模仿： 情节的安排与构建 语言积累与模仿 上下文的一致性 三、情节构建的原则与步骤 一）原则：先整体，后细节；先宏观，后微观 二）情节安排步骤 1、读后明确主题、主要人物及结尾句 2、根据原文最后情节及两句开头提示语，用四句话确定情节框架 衔接：(注意时空变化与代词的指代,防止离题) {5940675A-B579-460E-94D1-54222C63F5DA} Paragraph 1: I entered the shop, and one of the salesmen came to me. I couldn't believe my eyes. Paragraph 2: After a while, they quickly drove a pick-up truck to my car and started it. （注意时空变化与代词的指代） Para 1. It was the last meet of the season and Mike wasn't sure what to expect. Para 2. Finally came the end of the race. (根据It was the last meet of the season以及Finally came the end of the race, 须确定是在比赛现场，时间是最后一个赛季的比赛到比赛结束这一段时间及比赛后的时间。） Para 1. Every summer, we would visit Mr. Donovan and talk to him. Para 2. The next winter, word got around that Old Man Donovan had died. (根据every summer以及the next winter,确定第一段的时间与地点，第一段应该有两个时间，第一是every summer在哪里做了什么事，第二个时间应该是某一个one summer在哪里做了什么。第二段确定the next winter在哪里做了什么事。） Para 1. Look over my shoulder, I stared into the flashing lights of a truck. Para 2. I screamed that I couldn't make it. (没有时间状语与地点状语，但可以确定地点是转身看到卡车，是I的后面。确定什么时候在哪里我会screamed) Para 1. His heart sank. Para 2. Suddenly, he had an idea. (虽没有时间状语，但要先确定是在什么时间，什么地点感到"心头一沉"; 确定什么时候，什么地点有了主意) 如果时空转换较大，要紧扣主题将事情经过作为重点来写。 如果时空转换较少，一般是侧重语言描写，心理描写以及相关的细节描写。 3、运用5W1H设问法，完善故事内容 看到、听到、想到、说、做…… car stop broke down trouble couple happily thank-you note meaningful noticed two salesmen 4、利用十个划线关键词，预测可能的内容 Do it in the following way. meaningful 2. Life is meaningful when you can give a hand to those in trouble. 3. I will never forget the lesson Arthur taught me: I have Life is meaningful when you can give a hand to those in trouble. 1. Life is meaningful 总体上会出现这样的模式： 出现问题--解决问题--再次出现问题--终于解决问题--然后深有体会与感悟。 小技巧1 小技巧2 “前--后--左--右--上--下--远--近”，还可以看看你的“内心”。 “前句推动后句”的原则 从前有座山， 山上有座庙， 庙里有个老和尚， 老和尚给小和尚讲故事， 故事是这样的……。 小技巧3 Part3 “万能情景”续写万能模式 Paragraph 1: I entered the shop, and one of the salesmen came to me. I couldn't believe my eyes. 1. Surely, it was my long-lost friend, Arthur, always wearing a warm smile. 2. What a coincidence that Arthur would appear in fro ... ...