新目标2021年中考英语一轮话题写作（二）计划安排 （写作思路+范文+模拟练习）

中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台 话题写作（二）计划安排 教材话题链接 八年级上册 Unit 5 Do you want to watch a game show ? 八年级上册 Unit 6 I’m going to study computer science . 八年级上册 Unit 10 If you go to the party, you’ll have a great time ! 八年级下册 Unit 2 I’ll help to clean up the city parks . 典/例/分/析 假设你是珍妮，请给你们的美籍教Tom写一封邮件，向他简要介绍你校即将举办的英语节（English Festival ) ,邀请他参加本次活动，并请他在节日最后做一个关于如何学好英语的讲座。邮件还应包括以下内容： 要点如下： 1.活动时间：本周三上午8：30-11：30 2 活动地点：学校大厅(School Hall ) 3 活动内容：...... 注意： 1 词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。 2 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3 文中得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。 Dear Tom , How is it going ? _____ Looking forward to your reply . Yours Jenny 满分作文五步法 Step 1 审-审清题意 文体：_____ 人称:_____ 时态：_____ 功能:_____ 要点： 1._____ 2._____ 3. _____ 4. _____ Step 2 搭-列提纲，搭好框架 框架结构 开篇点题：点明活动：English Day 发出邀请：come and join us 主体内容：基本信息： 时间：from 8:30 to 11:30 on Friday 地点： School Hall 活动内容：sing English songs ; perform plays in English ; give a talk on how to learn English well 总结收尾：Looking forward to your reply . Step 3 : 连-连词成句 开篇点题： We will _____ in our school . Would you like to _____ ? 主体内容： The activity will begin _____in the Lecture Hall After the performance , you can _____ learn English well . 总结收尾 Looking forward to your reply . Step 4. 组-组句成篇 Dear Bob , How it it going ? We will have an English Day in our school . Would you like to come and join us ? This activity will begin in the School Hall at 8:30 this Wednesday and finish at 11:30 . We’ve prepared many programs for it, for example , English songs . Some students will also perform plays in English . What’s more , after the performance you can give a talk on how to learn English well. Looking forward to your reply Yours, Li Hua Step 5 修-修饰美化 扩句： 改为被动句：＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ 扩句： 改为强调句： 　　　　　　　　　　　All of the students _____that you could come and join us . 扩句：As you know , many students in our school _____learning English well . So when the performance finishes, _____ if you could give a talk and provide us with some practical advice . 【名师点晴】 文章的连贯性是评分的一条标准，因此同学们应根据故事情节，事情发生的先后次序（时间或空间），使用一些表示并列，递进等关系的过渡词，对写好的句子进行加工整理，使文章连贯、自然、流畅。 同时避免汉化现象，尽量使用熟悉的句型。 其次，正确使用固定搭配以及两三个好的句型，如：被动句、非谓语动词、复合句或it作形式主语的句子等。 最后，应该围绕动词中心进行恰当地联想和发挥。 美文诵读 Dear Tom , How is it going ? An English Day will be held on our school . All of the students do hope that you could come and join us . The activity will begin in the School Hall at 8:30 this Wednesday and last about 3 hours . We’ve prepared many programs ... ...