新目标2021年中考英语一轮话题写作（七）学习提升 （写作思路+范文+模拟练习）

中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台 话题写作（七）学习提升 教材话题链接 七年级上册 Unit 9 My favorite subject is science . 八年级上册 Unit 6 I’m going to study computer science . 九年级全一册 Unit 1 How can we become good learners ? 典/例/分/析 假定你是刘芳，你看到美国学生Sharon 在网上发的帖子，希望有人能帮助她提高普通话（Mandarin)水平，她可以教对方英语。请根据以下提示，用英语给她写一封电子 邮件。 1 表达向她提供帮助的意愿； 2 说明你能胜任的理由； 3 给出学好普通话的建议； 4 提出想学习英语的要求； 注意： 1 词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。 2 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3 文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。 Dear Sharon , How is it going ? _____ _____ _____ Looking forward to your reply Yours Liu Fang 满分作文五步法 Step 1 审-审清题意 文体：_____ 人称:_____ 时态：_____ 功能:_____ 要点： 1._____ 2._____ 3. _____ 4. _____ 适当发挥.... Step 2 搭-列提纲，搭好框架 框架结构 开篇点题： 关注到需求...want to improve the level of Mandarin 可提供帮助：offer help 主体内容： Reasons ：learn Mandarin for many year Mandarin is a must in my daily life . Advice : practice Mandarin every day read more books in Chinese see some Chinese films .... My request : to learn English The study way : can chat online . 总结收尾 Looking forward to your reply . Step 3 : 连-连词成句 开篇点题： Your post said that you _____ Mandarin . I’m quite interested in it . I think _____ it . 2 主体内容： I have _____ Mandarin _____ many years . I can _____ . You should _____every day . You can read more books _____ , see some Chinese films _____ some Chinese songs . We can _____and _____ each other . 3 总结收尾： Looking forward to your reply . Step 4. 组-组句成篇 Dear Sharon , How is it going ? Your post said that you want to improve your Mandarin . I’m quite interested in it . I think I’m fit for it . I have been learning Mandarin for many years, and Mandarin is a must in my daily life . So I can help you learn Mandarin well . You should practice Mandarin every day . Besides , you can read more books in Chinese , see Chinese films , listen to some Chinese songs and so on . You know, speaking and listening are very important for language learning . In your post , you said you can teach English as a reward . It’s just what I want . I’m eager to improve my English . If you agree , we can chat online to learn from each other . We can both learn well soon . Looking forward to your reply . Yours Liu Fang Step 5 修-修饰美化 合并句子： I’m quite _____ your post _____ you want to improve your Mandarin . 扩句： _____ China . I have been learning Mandarin for many years . 变换句型： You’d better _____ Mandarin every day 扩句： I believe _____ can improve our oral speaking _____ . 美文诵读 Dear Sharon , How is it going ? I’m girl from China. I’m quite interested in your post that you want to improve your Mandarin. I think I’m fit for it . As born in China . I have been learning Mandarin for many years . Mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily li ... ...