2021新高考真题一卷读后续写写作指导

2021新高考一卷读后续写写作指导 一：原文呈现 A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do. The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely. Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. 二：思路指导 原文分析：本文以第三人称，描述了一对双胞胎在母亲节为妈妈做早餐，送上一份惊喜的故事。这也是新高考的第一次续写真题。整体难度不大，所描述事件贴近生活，是每个孩子都可能经历过的事情，故事情节的发展也一目了然。如何在平淡的情节上增加故事色彩，则是本篇文章写作的更高境界。 明线：A surprise 暗线：love between families 根据续写部分第一段的首句，可以知道正在双胞胎失望之时，父亲的出现给他们带来了希望。可以从以下的几个方面入手去考虑问题： 呈上： How did father feel on seeing the mess? 细节： What did father do to help? 启下： Who cooked the breakfast at last? 在第一段的描写当中，同学们可以充分的利用原文中的信息，描写做饭的场景。以达到对原文呼应的目的。父亲帮忙后，怎样还让母亲感觉到惊喜呢？这是父亲和孩子们之间的一个小秘密。 第二段则是向妈妈献上惊喜的时刻了。 呈上：What did they say? 细节：How did mother react and feel? 点题: What a surprise! 第二段可以运用到平时练习用过的表示惊喜、感动的情感描写。 三：下水文写作 续写下水文1： As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Seeing the mess, their father froze with shock, as if rooted on the ground. But soon he realized their in ... ...