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课件网) 人教新目标九年级上册 Section B 3a—Self Check 写作课公开课 1. To write a diary entry explaining which rule(s) you do not agree with at home and how you think the rule(s) should be changed 2. To check yourself What rules do you have at home can’t watch TV can’t play computer games can't spend time on the phone Warming up can’t talk while eating can’t stay up late can’t make the room dirty Pre-writing Do you have many rules at home Can you tell us which rules are better and which one you don’t agree with Sure, I agree with it, because it is bad for us, we should follow the rule. I don’t think we should be allowed to play computer games. Pre-writing Free talk How about watching TV Well, I don’t agree with it. I think the rule should be changed. We can watch TV on… Hum, do you think we should be allowed to have part-time jobs I agree. We can learn a lot from working. With a partner, discuss some rules at home that you agree or disagree with. Make some notes in the chart. Rule Why you agree or disagree with it How you think the rule should be changed can’t play computer games can’t watch TV. agree—sitting in front of the computer for hours playing games isn’t good for health no need to be changed disagree—not all TV programs are bad for students; need to relax sometimes, rather than spend all the time studying. should be allowed to watch TV programs that have educational value (such as documentaries); should be allowed to watch TV programs on weekends. Pre -writing 3a must be home for dinner every day disagree –takes away opportunities to spend time with friends; makes life uninteresting. should be allowed to have dinner with friends as long as I don’t stay out too late and it does not clash with any important family activity Write a diary entry explaining which rule(s) you do not agree with at home and how you think the rule(s) should be changed. Use the following expressions to help you: I do not agree with … I think I should be allowed to … I would like to … I could … if I … While -writing 3b 【审题】 文体：_____ 内容：_____ 人称：_____ 时态：_____ 议论文 谈论家规 第一人称 一般现在时 While -writing 【思路点拨】 Step Idea Expression 1 2 3 文章结构 开篇点题，对哪条（些）家规不赞同 展开具体表述 提出改善的建议 I do not agree with… It takes away…, affect… I think I should be allowed to… I would like… I wish my parents… While -writing I do not agree with the rule that I must be home for dinner every day. This is because the rule affects my social life. It takes away important opportunities for me to spend time with friends.As a result, my life is quite boring sometimes. I think I should be allowed to havedinner with my friends once in a while. For example, I would like to hang out with my classmates until after dinner on Fridays. I wish my parents will allow me to do this if I promise not to stay out too late and if there is no important family activity on those d ... ...
