Unit 1 Where did you go on vacation?单元写作指导+写作实践

中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台 Unit 1 Where did you go on vacation 单元主题写作 一、话题分析 本单元以”节日与假期（Festivals and Holidays )”为话题。 写作方法 4W1H 法游记类作文 4W：哪些人物-who 什么地点-where 什么时间-when 做了什么-what 1H：活动感受-how 素材积累 写游记类作文常用词汇： go on a trip 去郊游 travel 旅游 weather 天气 take photos 照相 set off 出发 a place of interest 一个名胜 teach oneself 自学 make friends 交朋友 go shopping 去购物 take part in 参加 chance 机会 party 派对 summer /winter vacation 暑假/寒假 写游记类作文常用句型： What a .... we have ! 我们度过一个多么.... The winter vacation this year is really ....今年的寒假是真的... There is going to be ...将会有... The activity lasted for ... 活动持续.... It’s really relaxing to... ...是十分令人放松的 We had fun doing ... 我们愉快做... 写作任务 假如上周你去大连度假了，请你写一篇英语短文来介绍你的这次旅行。词数60左右。 _____五、高分作文 Last week I went to Dalian for a vacation with my family . It is a beautiful city in China . The weather was very good . First of all , I had seafood . It was delicious . Secondly , I went fishing and swimming .I felt very happy . Thirdly , I climbed the mountains . It made me very excited . At last , I took some photos . The tour is so nice that I won’t forget it . I will go there next time. 名师点评 本文使用一般过去时描述了上周去大连旅游的情况。文章语言简练，思路清晰，采用“总-分-总”的结构，先总体概括上周去了大连。接着描述了在大连做的一些事情，最后表达了旅游的感受。 写作实践 Linda 暑假过得很开心。假如你是Linda , 请根据以下提示写一篇70词左右的短文讲述一下你是如何度过暑假的。 要点提示： 去海南旅游，在沙滩上玩； 做自己喜欢的事情，比如：逛书店买书； 和朋友踢足球，进行体育锻炼； 每天早上读英语，上午安排两个小时做作业。 _____ 参考答案 I enjoyed my summer vacation . I traveled to Hainan with my parents and we had fun on the beach . During the vacation I often went to my favorite bookstore and bought many interesting books . Sometimes I played soccer with my friends in the afternoon . Playing sports can keep us healthy . I also spent some time in studying . Every morning I read English and from 9:00 a.m. to 11:00 a.m. I did my homework . All in all , it was a great vacation . 21世纪教育网 www.21cnjy.com 精品试卷·第 2 页 （共 2 页） HYPERLINK "http://21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com) " 21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)