(
课件网) Continuation writing ANALYSIS OUT The main problems in writing Handwriting 书写 Sample 1 The main problems in writing Handwriting 书写 Plot 情节 Word number 词数(150) Grammatical mistakes 语法错误 Underline 下划线 Language style 语言风格 Sample 1 The main problems in writing Handwriting 书写 Plot 情节 Word number 词数(150) Grammatical mistakes 语法错误 Underline 下划线 Language style 语言风格 Neglecting given sentences 忽略给出句 Sample 2 The main problems in writing Handwriting 书写 Plot 情节 Word number 词数(150) Grammatical mistakes 语法错误 Underline 下划线 Language style 语言风格 Neglecting given sentences 忽略给出句 Additional character 增加人物 Sample 3 The main problems in writing Handwriting 书写 Plot 情节 Word number 词数(150) Grammatical mistakes 语法错误 Underline 下划线 Language style 语言风格 Neglecting given sentences 忽略给出句 Additional character 增加人物 Sample 3 The main problems in writing Handwriting 书写 Plot 情节 Word number 词数(150) Grammatical mistakes 语法错误 Underline 下划线 Language style 语言风格 Neglecting given sentences 忽略给出句 Additional character 增加人物 15 4 9 7 3 8 15 10 5 4 The main problems in writing 2 The main problems Plot of the given passage Main characters Main events Use the given sentences Development Possible ending Handwriting 书写 Plot 情节 Word number 词数(150) Grammatical mistakes 语法错误 Underline 下划线 Language style 语言风格 Neglecting given sentences 忽略给出句 Additional character 增加人物 15 4 9 7 3 8 15 10 5 4 During Napoleon’s invasion of Russia, his troops were battling in the middle of another small town, when he was accidentally separated from his men. A group of Russian soldiers noticed him and began chasing him through the streets. Napoleon ran for his life and hid himself in a little furriers(毛皮商的) shop. As Napoleon entered the shop grasping(喘气) for breath, he saw the furrier and cried sadly, “Save me, save me! Where can I hide ” The furrier said, “Quick, under the big pile of furs in the corner.” He covered Napoleon up with many furs. No sooner had he finished than the Russian soldiers burst into the room, shouting “Where is he We saw him come in.” Despite the furriers protests, they tore the shop apart trying to find Napoleon. They stuck their swords into the pile of furs but didn’t find him. Soon, they gave up and left. After some time, Napoleon came out from under the furs unharmed, just as his personal guards came into the room. The furrier turned to Napoleon and said, “Excuse me for asking such a great man this question, but what was it like to be under those furs, knowing that the next moment would surely be your last ” Napoleon drew himself up to his full height and said to the furrier angrily, “How could you ask such a question of me, the Emperor Napoleon! Guards, take this rude man out, blindfold him and execute (处死) him. I, myself, will personally give the command to fire!” The g ... ...
