中考二轮专题复习课件 （八年级上）书面表达点拨

课件28张PPT。书面表达点拨八年级上一，写作典例之体育与健康 （一）（2013，吉林） 健康是幸福的基石。尤其是青少年的健康，更加受到家庭、学校乃至全社会的关注。假如你是你们学校的健康达人，应校英语俱乐部的邀请，你将给全体成员做一个“The Importance and Secrets of Keeping Healthy”的报告。请参考下面的提示，完成报告。 要求：1. 80词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 所给提示仅供参考，需适当发挥； 3. 文中不得使用真实的校名与姓名。 【思路点拨】 一、审题。 仔细审题，明确写作要求，确定文章的体裁、时态和格式。本篇书面表达是一篇介绍健康重要性的报告。文章总体应以一般现在时为主。 二、注意写作要点，梳理写作框架。 本篇书面表达是给出提示要点的作文，所给提示的内容一定要写全面，按照提示词的思路进行写作。 三、连句成篇，注意语言的连贯和过渡。 在写作过程中，考生应适当运用连词，使文章过渡自然。最后检查作文时，还要注意单词拼写、标点符号、字母大小写等细节问题。 【范文欣赏】 Dear friends, It‘s a great honor to speak here. My topic is “The Importance and Secrets of Keeping Healthy”. I’m so glad you care about health like me. Good health may bring us a long happy life, good work and even better grades. Keeping healthy is really important. As for the secrets of keeping healthy, I think different people have different answers. In my opinion, having a healthy lifestyle is the most important. First, it‘s helpful to have enough sleep and a balanced diet. Breakfast is the top meal of the day, so we can’t miss it. At the same time, find a physical activity you enjoy and keep on doing it. I have kept playing ping pong for seven years and I really enjoy doing that. Also, everyone should develop a sense of humor and always be a happy person. I hope you look after your health from now on and live a happy and healthy life forever! Thanks for listening!（二）（2013，西宁） 近年，由教育部、国家体育总局、共青团中央联合发起了“全国亿万青少年学生阳光体育运动”。你在学校参加了此项活动，请你配合此项活动以“Let‘s Do Sports”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文，要求包括以下要点： （1）运动带给你的益处； （2）最喜欢的体育项目及原因； （3）号召大家一起来运动，强身健体。 【思路点拨】 本篇文段表达是以“Let’s Do Sports”为题，写与体育运动相关的内容。首先写体育运动给自己带来的好处；然后写自己最喜欢的体育运动，并给出合理的理由；最后发出号召，号召大家一起来运动，强身健体。【范文欣赏】 Let‘s Do Sports I think doing sports is necessary. Sports can help us relax and concentrate on our studies better. Sports can make us grow well. Sports can bring us friends. Which sport do you like? Running is my favorite. At first, I went running to keep my body fit. Now, I find it fun and free. You can run anytime you feel like it. All you need is a pair of running shoes. You can see all kinds of scenes while running and stop at those that attract you to appreciate them. Haven’t you got a favorite sport? Stop hesitating! Come and run with me!二，叙事记叙文的写作 一、叙事记叙文以记述事件、描写见闻为主要写作方式。写叙事记叙文一般是开门见山，直接交代时间、地点、人物、事件等，然后详细叙述事情发展的原因、过程和结果等。一个 ... ...