(
课件网) 人教新目标版 八年级(下) Unit 5 What were you doing when the rainstorm came Period 5 Section B 3a-Self check 写作课优质课 Presentation Learning aims 1.掌握下列词汇：point out, go away 掌握句型：While I was walking home from school, I saw a strange light in the sky. But when I pointed it out to my friend, it went away. When I heard my name, my heart beat so quickly I thought I would stop breathing. 2. 通过同桌对话在3a中把学过的语言用回答问题的形式进行梳理，再按照3b的写作框架提示完整地描写件难忘且重要的事，说明时间、地点、事件过程以及为什么自己记得这么清楚。 3.通过写作指导，能就本单元的话题进行写作。通过写过去的故事激励自己关心生活、关注社会，能辩证地积极地看待它们，形成正确的价值观。 Presentation Revision Pre-writing Look and answer. What was the event When did it happen Where did it happen What was Robert Allen doing The World Trade Center was taken down. It happened on April 4, 1968. It happened in the US. When he heard the news, he is eating dinner in the kitchen. What was the event When did it happen Where did it happen What was Kate Smith doing The World Trade Center was taken down. It happened on September 11, 2001. It happened in New York. When she heard the news, she is working in her office. Presentation Revision Pre-writing Look and say. Look at the picture and talk about what they were doing when the plane hit the World Trade Center. What was/were sb. doing when the plane hit World Trade Center Sandy Twin brothers Sammy father mother dog Presentation Reading for writing Pre-writing Look and say. What words, sentences or other things can you learn from this text to write your event 文章中心句 例子来支撑 背景来介绍 细节来填充 Presentation Reading for writing Pre-writing Look and say. How are you going to write the event What & When: I remember what I was doing on… Where & who: I was….with… Feelings: I was completely shocked… 分段中心句 单元新表达 末段总起句 细节来填充 How are you going to write the event 衔接词：More recently 新表达：has meaning to This was the day I will never forget... I remember doing sth. … I didn’t believe... Presentation Reading for writing Pre-writing Look and say. Although the storm broke many things apart, it brought families and neighbors closer together. Presentation Interview Pre-writing Look and say. the lockdown of the city of Wuhan on January 23rd What was the event The lockdown of the city of Wuhan. When did it happen It happened on January 23rd. Where did it happen It happened in Wuhan. What were you doing When/While… What were your friends doing My friends were ….. Why was it important Because it brought people closer together. Why do you remember this event Because my mother went to Wuhan as a voulunteer. Presentation Making notes Pre-writing Look and fill. 3a Make notes about an event you remember well. event time place activities reasons Facts (事实情况） Details (细节信息） Meaning (意义影响） Presentation Making notes Pre-writin ... ...
